LiViNT

brokenhal0 · 12-13-2013, 05:19 AM

call me dark maul evil king robot feelings bling in rotted ceilings
phantasmos black glocks and c4 war mind control my heartbeat
long days in the waters shark week bedbugs in the sheets of anarchy
my veins never pump defeat just look low holes is deep fallen asleep
caustic applause by zombie hand fans glance
things get a lil warmer when the lambs stand
serve a purpose and firstest to murderous worstest gray skies
spin intricate webs within my 8 eyes laylines vibrate in space signs
walkin out the cave blind a***ia laced the grape wines
cut a angle that breaks a snake spine
i make time for everything so you cant take mine

Wise Wiggles · 12-13-2013, 08:53 AM

niiiiice

Bedbugs in the sheets of anarchy was a cool touch

PancakeBrah · 12-13-2013, 10:04 PM

"serve a purpose and firstest to murderous worstest gray skies
spin intricate webs within my 8 eyes laylines vibrate in space signs
walkin out the cave blind a***ia laced the grape wines "

Yes.

Always one of the more interesting reads in open mic. I prefer most of your other drops to this but still fun to read.

Vulgar · 12-22-2013, 11:32 PM

Nice stuff. Versatile wording and unconventional flow.

12-13-2013, 05:19 AM	#1
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	LiViNT call me dark maul evil king robot feelings bling in rotted ceilings phantasmos black glocks and c4 war mind control my heartbeat long days in the waters shark week bedbugs in the sheets of anarchy my veins never pump defeat just look low holes is deep fallen asleep caustic applause by zombie hand fans glance things get a lil warmer when the lambs stand serve a purpose and firstest to murderous worstest gray skies spin intricate webs within my 8 eyes laylines vibrate in space signs walkin out the cave blind a**ia laced the grape wines cut a angle that breaks a snake spine i make time for everything so you cant take mine Last edited by brokenhal0; 12-13-2013 at 05:30 AM.*

12-13-2013, 08:53 AM	#2
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	niiiiice Bedbugs in the sheets of anarchy was a cool touch __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

12-13-2013, 10:04 PM	#3
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	"serve a purpose and firstest to murderous worstest gray skies spin intricate webs within my 8 eyes laylines vibrate in space signs walkin out the cave blind a***ia laced the grape wines " Yes. Always one of the more interesting reads in open mic. I prefer most of your other drops to this but still fun to read. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

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12-22-2013, 11:32 PM	#4
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Nice stuff. Versatile wording and unconventional flow.