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brokenhal0 12-13-2013 05:19 AM

LiViNT
 
call me dark maul evil king robot feelings bling in rotted ceilings
phantasmos black glocks and c4 war mind control my heartbeat
long days in the waters shark week bedbugs in the sheets of anarchy
my veins never pump defeat just look low holes is deep fallen asleep
caustic applause by zombie hand fans glance
things get a lil warmer when the lambs stand
serve a purpose and firstest to murderous worstest gray skies
spin intricate webs within my 8 eyes laylines vibrate in space signs
walkin out the cave blind a***ia laced the grape wines
cut a angle that breaks a snake spine
i make time for everything so you cant take mine

Wise Wiggles 12-13-2013 08:53 AM

niiiiice

Bedbugs in the sheets of anarchy was a cool touch

PancakeBrah 12-13-2013 10:04 PM

"serve a purpose and firstest to murderous worstest gray skies
spin intricate webs within my 8 eyes laylines vibrate in space signs
walkin out the cave blind a***ia laced the grape wines "

Yes.

Always one of the more interesting reads in open mic. I prefer most of your other drops to this but still fun to read.

Vulgar 12-22-2013 11:32 PM

Nice stuff. Versatile wording and unconventional flow.


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