XI WK VI: Eviction (1-1) vs. Universe (5-0) (UNIVERSE WINS)

Cereal · 01-29-2023, 09:46 AM

eviction:

some beautiful words, the savana you dont hear about such beautiful scenery so loved that.. i love the story of the cat its very powerful im really enjoy its a very good story.. very pretty it didnt drift it was a solid story all the way through plus it had good thoughts in reference to art really set the tone.. thanks..

universe:

i like the family values of how detailed your verse its already eclipsed eviction with such few lines by the time you dropped the reference to the name eviction/house ownership.. landlord.. dope.. i like how you showed the food intake section.. dope ending private message..

vote = universe

just more detailed and enjoyable..

01-29-2023, 09:46 AM	#7
Cereal killa Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 855 Battle Record: 1-6 Rep Power: 1312300	eviction: some beautiful words, the savana you dont hear about such beautiful scenery so loved that.. i love the story of the cat its very powerful im really enjoy its a very good story.. very pretty it didnt drift it was a solid story all the way through plus it had good thoughts in reference to art really set the tone.. thanks.. universe: i like the family values of how detailed your verse its already eclipsed eviction with such few lines by the time you dropped the reference to the name eviction/house ownership.. landlord.. dope.. i like how you showed the food intake section.. dope ending private message.. vote = universe just more detailed and enjoyable.. __________________ A-double scribble - A 19 th century euphemism for ass ..

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