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Join Date: Jun 2013
Posts: 523
Battle Record: 12-12=4
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Cereal - This was actually a bit more structured story wise then your usual stuff the metaphors behind money the struggles for it and the consequences that come with materialism the highs and lows of drug dealer /addict i mean you wrote this within a few hours the topic was posted but it wasn't a bad read considering it was possible troll post i never know with you nor do I care tbh it was better then your opponents.
Civil - Listening to spiders Sharing with spiders Cumming to spiders Cumming with spiders Holding hands with spiders ( all 8 of them) lol that's just crazy i mean you could have taken this battle storywise if actually continued what you started with.. but once again troll posting.. i should give you the W for the simple fact Cereal gave Sral a W over me about a emo snowman and someones dead father I personally hate soft emo verse's that read like a hallmark card and simple rhyme schemes that use frail but decadent wordplay...but i been around the site long enough to know people play favorites and have there own styles they prefer .. regardless I can't be salty bout it and have to keep it fair not everyone gives two shits about these man poem tournaments and your verse this week clearly shows it ..I did laugh at cumming with spiders tho lol.. Vote- Cereal Last edited by brokenhal0; 12-22-2022 at 05:54 PM. |
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