WEEK NINE CHAMP MATCH: NYCSPITZ (4-0) vs EVICTION (6-1) EVICTION WINS 4-0

[Mike Wrecka]

Tough battle to vote on

Evictions piece was too long and NYCs was too short. Eviction seemed like he tried too hard and NYC seemed like he didn’t try hard enough.

Eviction- the first half of the verse was much better than the second. This feed may annoy you but when I read your stuff I feel like I’m reading a verse written by someone that has studied topicals and is now emulating it. It all feels very clinical. And robotic. I’d like to see you write with more emotion. And more style. You use a lot of lines and a lot of words to say very little. Its a lot of filler. Im saying these things for you to use as constructive criticism so take it for what it’s worth. All that being said , your rhymes and flow are good. And you were working towards the topic.

NYC- this wasn’t your best piece. I think you figured that you could just out rhyme your opponent with superior flow, multis and verbiage to glide to the win. The lack of effort showed because your take on the topic was flimsy at best. For a champ match you have to come harder. As you know.

Very close. But I’m going to give it to Eviction based on effort. And while I don’t think he nailed the topic I think his verse was at least working towards it more than NYCs. Length also played a role

Mvgt- Eviction



Just wanted to add that I did enjoy both pieces , just that I’ve read both three times so the negative stood out more than the positive at that point.