WEEK 11: Pharaohs army (2-3) (signed out) vs brokenhal0 (1-5) OPEN FOR FEED

Adverse · 06-28-2020, 04:10 AM

Think this was a sobering little piece Halo, I have trouble following your narratives at times but this one showed through a little clearer imo. A cancer patient slowly dying and just going through the treatment to no avail. We've seen a couple cancer pieces this season but I think this had a more realistic take and showed just the toll cancer puts on someone, and how hope slowly slips away from them day by day. Cool piece and LOVED this imagery piece

waking up past 3 hoping the days lost
stale pizza on the table ashes on the paint floor
a bird with no wings singing in the cave moss

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06-28-2020, 04:10 AM	#4
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Think this was a sobering little piece Halo, I have trouble following your narratives at times but this one showed through a little clearer imo. A cancer patient slowly dying and just going through the treatment to no avail. We've seen a couple cancer pieces this season but I think this had a more realistic take and showed just the toll cancer puts on someone, and how hope slowly slips away from them day by day. Cool piece and LOVED this imagery piece waking up past 3 hoping the days lost stale pizza on the table ashes on the paint floor a bird with no wings singing in the cave moss