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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
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mostly it's bullshit. Some of the times I prattle the truth
stepped outside of space/time. The truths I've had to embrace mortal steps taken with faith will alter matter and space This one truth has many layers - it's a matter of taste to leave this life of trials depressed or floating battered in grace ^^^^ this whole switch up was pretty nice the start of the verse was sick though. every other line was scathing and had some nice lines that over 60 & still looking gorgeous made me lol a lot of sick rhymes in this shit though really liked passionate loop/had to redo. that was dope...overall a pretty sick piece keep it up.
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