Letterman vs OG Smokenstein - LETTERMAN WINS

sral · 03-05-2016, 09:11 AM

@OG that lines in my hand palm reader shit was dope to me

pantheon could have been something but the wording let you down

rest I wasn't feeling too much tbc

Letterman actually had a few nice lines here, the smokebombs was a cool name play I hadn't seen done. Fry with the metal was a good concept, I hated the comma between Stein and bears even though I got it, that horrid comma ruined the shit for me man...

last four I could have done without if we're keeping it a buck

Letterman got it on the strength of those first four

03-05-2016, 09:11 AM	#12
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