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Mr. J · 10-12-2015, 02:01 AM

It might be because I haven't read a piece like this from you in awhile
but that transition into the second question made me lol

Strip her naked and bite, tearing her flesh, making a slice
Smelling her fragrance, it's nice, then slit her throat with a grin
Then scuttle away like a rodent, totally devoted to sin.

"And what of the woman's family? Do you consider them?"

Consider who? Those who were too weak to protect?
Where is loves healing power when the demons infect?
^^^^
I thought that was weird I didnt really like that but...it was funny
I enjoyed everything about this your word usage makes your pieces a fun journey
its a disappointment you never show in the AOWL cause Id like to piss on you
but this was cool buddy, thank for the read :)

10-12-2015, 02:01 AM	#10
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	It might be because I haven't read a piece like this from you in awhile but that transition into the second question made me lol Strip her naked and bite, tearing her flesh, making a slice Smelling her fragrance, it's nice, then slit her throat with a grin Then scuttle away like a rodent, totally devoted to sin. "And what of the woman's family? Do you consider them?" Consider who? Those who were too weak to protect? Where is loves healing power when the demons infect? ^^^^ I thought that was weird I didnt really like that but...it was funny I enjoyed everything about this your word usage makes your pieces a fun journey its a disappointment you never show in the AOWL cause Id like to piss on you but this was cool buddy, thank for the read :) __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

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