Golden Linings Frozen Compliance

Pharaohs Army · 08-15-2015, 01:48 AM

sick.
i should probably pick one of your half-assed verses because there's not much to say here.

You have a knack for 2 important things (when you try at your top level): structured rhyming but also incorporating some creative but understandable rhyme-bending.

I saw this also in a particular topical verse which was very very impressive. i'm not digging for the link.. it was a win vs. unbornbuddha somewhere.

i'm of course vastly over-generalizing but, I think, in a way, your style is what I could be if i got a little better.

Everyone's different and I like to be myself. I'm just speaking as far as structural clarity&shit.

But please don't mistake that for shameless fandom; that realm for me is soley reserved for bb

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08-15-2015, 01:48 AM	#6
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	sick. i should probably pick one of your half-assed verses because there's not much to say here. You have a knack for 2 important things (when you try at your top level): structured rhyming but also incorporating some creative but understandable rhyme-bending. I saw this also in a particular topical verse which was very very impressive. i'm not digging for the link.. it was a win vs. unbornbuddha somewhere. i'm of course vastly over-generalizing but, I think, in a way, your style is what I could be if i got a little better. Everyone's different and I like to be myself. I'm just speaking as far as structural clarity&shit. But please don't mistake that for shameless fandom; that realm for me is soley reserved for bb