RND2. Bust vs Lotto Smirk {Bust wins}

[Lotto Smirk]

if the weapons out, I'm killing I ain't missing u TRUST
cus when I'm letting them off it's certain the shots are destined to bust
I'm a Bond villain u lack vision no-ones predicting u might win
u had a good run on the odd job but now ima take ur head off just like him
this is easy for me, u sleazy wen u free, against u I'll waste ten
cus when I write Ispaz rhymes u just looked retarded when u faced them
don't give a fuck what u done on RB cus on netcees u a joker
u NEED that work on rap battles cus here we still apply to u as mediocre
The guns are out making sure u dead, hush featured u for to long ur lame
So I'm entering the next round, emptying it N leaving u w/ just 2 mags to your name

G/l

[Ghost1]

Dooooog,
Doog?


I spit phrases that thrill, but it's a hobby to murder too,
See i got some frazes that kill.. In fact He Constantly bodies n buries u,

Meh

If u can't beat um join um, that's a bitch move n u no longer should Rap
S'like fraze gets u the ball on the block n u lob it up. u gotta POST stronger than that

Played

Ur too girly man, type to self tan in early Jan., n claim to suck a dick up mean
Damn, I'd love to find a reason NOT to call latte bitch but when he coffee spits up cream

Fire....kinda gay tho man lol

Always writing long as verses.. Pure trash, I'm like bitch surrender the pen
I mean ull drop 20 lines to get 1 quote.. Resulting in a hit percentage of 10..

Eh

^thsts awful taste, so get back to tossin salads n talkin fake
Cuz Why worry bout lotto smirk, when baby wipes'll get that shit eating grin off ya face

This is ok I guess....weird tho



if the weapons out, I'm killing I ain't missing u TRUST
cus when I'm letting them off it's certain the shots are destined to bust

Ok

I'm a Bond villain u lack vision no-ones predicting u might win
u had a good run on the odd job but now ima take ur head off just like him

Eh

this is easy for me, u sleazy wen u free, against u I'll waste ten
cus when I write Ispaz rhymes u just looked retarded when u faced them

Seen too many Ispaz flips lately an this wasn't a good one NE ways

don't give a fuck what u done on RB cus on netcees u a joker
u NEED that work on rap battles cus here we still apply to u as mediocre

This was cool

The guns are out making sure u dead, hush featured u for to long ur lame
So I'm entering the next round, emptying it N leaving u w/ just 2 mags to your name

Played

G/l
Pussy^





Didn't love this battle. Niether really blew me away.....lotto was a bit too simple an bust was trynna do some weird shit w his verse.......bust still had the lotb for me w his latte line tho so I'll edge it to him

V bust

[Sharp]

I spit phrases that thrill, but it's a hobby to murder too,
See i got some frazes that kill.. In fact He Constantly bodies n buries u,
predictable and done a lot but relevant
If u can't beat um join um, that's a bitch move n u no longer should Rap
S'like fraze gets u the ball on the block n u lob it up. u gotta POST stronger than that
post flips are pretty done at this point. appreciate the connections you're trying to make but not hugely feeling it
Ur too girly man, type to self tan in early Jan., n claim to suck a dick up mean
Damn, I'd love to find a reason NOT to call latte bitch but when he coffee spits up cream
la-te and lot-a don't quite work for me cause i'd say 'lot-uh'. but this makes sense and is cool imo
Always writing long as verses.. Pure trash, I'm like bitch surrender the pen
I mean ull drop 20 lines to get 1 quote.. Resulting in a hit percentage of 10..
I think I'm misisng something with this? or you just did simple bar division?
^thsts awful taste, so get back to tossin salads n talkin fake
Cuz Why worry bout lotto smirk, when baby wipes'll get that shit eating grin off ya face
smirk lines are done a lot on him. this is ok


if the weapons out, I'm killing I ain't missing u TRUST
cus when I'm letting them off it's certain the shots are destined to bust
cool
I'm a Bond villain u lack vision no-ones predicting u might win
u had a good run on the odd job but now ima take ur head off just like him
did he beat odd? idk but if he did this is ok
this is easy for me, u sleazy wen u free, against u I'll waste ten
cus when I write Ispaz rhymes u just looked retarded when u faced them
kinda predictable, I spaz flips are frequent enough where I'd shy away from just using those wihtout any other ltayesr
don't give a fuck what u done on RB cus on netcees u a joker
u NEED that work on rap battles cus here we still apply to u as mediocre
what does 'apply to u as mediocre' mean? I get what you're going for but that doesn't make sense to me
The guns are out making sure u dead, hush featured u for to long ur lame
So I'm entering the next round, emptying it N leaving u w/ just 2 mags to your name
mag lines are dead to me. Maybe its because I write them on the reg but they're done to death


man close but I got bust with slihglty better misses and thats' really all. tight battle, props to both.

v/bust

[Victor.]

Originally Posted by Bust

Dooooog,

I spit phrases that thrill, but it's a hobby to murder too,
See i got some frazes that kill.. In fact He Constantly bodies n buries u,
cool personal attempt here, but the execution felt sorta lazy.. if the setup here was more relevant to him constantly losing to fraze I think it could have been a stronger line
If u can't beat um join um, that's a bitch move n u no longer should Rap
S'like fraze gets u the ball on the block n u lob it up. u gotta POST stronger than that
LOL ok this is dope
Ur too girly man, type to self tan in early Jan., n claim to suck a dick up mean
Damn, I'd love to find a reason NOT to call latte bitch but when he coffee spits up cream
cool attempt here, I like how u tried to tie in the multiple schemes in the punch, I just find the LATTE bit forced. maybe not tho, its borderline. I still dig the bar for the creativty
Always writing long as verses.. Pure trash, I'm like bitch surrender the pen
I mean ull drop 20 lines to get 1 quote.. Resulting in a hit percentage of 10..
LOL! this my fav style of punch, I really liked this line. super sting
^thsts awful taste, so get back to tossin salads n talkin fake
Cuz Why worry bout lotto smirk, when baby wipes'll get that shit eating grin off ya face
this is aight, the "baby wipes" part thru me off cuz it dont add anything to the bar

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

if the weapons out, I'm killing I ain't missing u TRUST
cus when I'm letting them off it's certain the shots are destined to bust
ok but sorta bland
I'm a Bond villain u lack vision no-ones predicting u might win
u had a good run on the odd job but now ima take ur head off just like him
ok but again its sorta just there, its really lacking emotion or ur personality. i think u need to find a away to come thru more in ur bars
this is easy for me, u sleazy wen u free, against u I'll waste ten
cus when I write Ispaz rhymes u just looked retarded when u faced them
ok cool, this is good
don't give a fuck what u done on RB cus on netcees u a joker
u NEED that work on rap battles cus here we still apply to u as mediocre
eh, this is kinda just a bar that should of been left on the cutting room floor
The guns are out making sure u dead, hush featured u for to long ur lame
So I'm entering the next round, emptying it N leaving u w/ just 2 mags to your name
hmm. the beginning was fire. entering the next round and emptying it... that was really good. u ended it awkward and weak sadly. so the punch didnt land full power
G/l

I got bust here.