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Old 11-08-2013, 10:45 PM   #14
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The flow was rather sporadic at times to me like when the Kuklinski line comes in, here's another example:

I've wasted at least a'half'a dozen save me's
On the shit I would've done if I wasn't lazy
I'm peeing circles with this genius journal
I'll spit the dimensions, you just bleed through the worm holes


but overall I enjoyed it and it picked itself up fast. Most of the time it was on point tho', thought the content itself was cool and witty, kept me entertained throughout, dope closure. Keep it up.
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