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Join Date: Jun 2013
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time slows vines grow on pine cones adonis pose
slime poems dead kids caught between home and a rest stop your best pops dinner and bed pan expand to amazing scans tucan sam candy land for you fraud need a ambulance my blade scrape off the ground dance loud chant silent sound scan foundation a blessing for you to found nathans a dead dog soak the food in water burnt it up chef another order to slaughter chemical castrate mental nature down low frequency up taint at stake the kids sun shine on my shadows the way i live cant make it out thus strange like a plato thought dpt snort don't get it twisted like tornado force ill beat you up like tomato sauce a can of that for your school picture between the dual rivers druids shiver lizards change color lisp on the roof lookin at the moon to find proof alien source insane arabian horse kickin paint pleiadian stars trigger figure 8 vein mainframe my jab to fast im behind you before the pain delay to remind you leave you with my thoughts so i know where to always find you and lay a chord with them correct rhythm before death hit em kept my dogs skiddish feeding me pork knishes all delicious Last edited by brokenhal0; 09-30-2013 at 05:49 AM. |
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nok Su kow
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Fresh as it ever was.
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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
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Interesting style. at first it just seemed like ramblings
which is cool. but it has some lines that pop out at you good combination of ideas and maybe the idea is foreign to mr regardless it was quite the read...keep writing
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Razor-thin derision
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,422
Battle Record: 40-25
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lizards change color lisp on the roof lookin at the moon to find proof
alien source insane arabian horse kickin paint pleiadian stars trigger figure 8 vein mainframe my jab to fast im behind you before the pain delay to remind you ^This part was hot. Fast projectiles / no formal style of plating type of approach. Quality content. |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2013
Posts: 523
Battle Record: 12-12=4
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thanks my dudes
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