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Old 09-30-2013, 05:46 AM   #1
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Old 09-30-2013, 11:08 AM   #2
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Fresh as it ever was.
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Old 09-30-2013, 02:55 PM   #3
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Interesting style. at first it just seemed like ramblings
which is cool. but it has some lines that pop out at you
good combination of ideas and maybe the idea is foreign to mr
regardless it was quite the read...keep writing
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Old 09-30-2013, 04:58 PM   #4
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^This part was hot.

Fast projectiles / no formal style of plating type of approach. Quality content.
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Old 10-01-2013, 04:34 AM   #5
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