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brokenhal0 09-30-2013 05:46 AM

doberman
 
time slows vines grow on pine cones adonis pose
slime poems dead kids caught between home and a rest stop

your best pops dinner and bed pan expand to amazing scans
tucan sam candy land for you fraud need a ambulance
my blade scrape off the ground dance loud chant silent sound scan

foundation a blessing for you to found nathans a dead dog
soak the food in water burnt it up chef another order to slaughter

chemical castrate mental nature down low frequency up taint
at stake the kids sun shine on my shadows the way i live
cant make it out thus strange like a plato thought dpt snort

don't get it twisted like tornado force ill beat you up like tomato sauce
a can of that for your school picture between the dual rivers druids shiver

lizards change color lisp on the roof lookin at the moon to find proof
alien source insane arabian horse kickin paint pleiadian stars trigger
figure 8 vein mainframe my jab to fast im behind you before the pain delay
to remind you

leave you with my thoughts so i know where to always find you
and lay a chord with them correct rhythm before death hit em
kept my dogs skiddish feeding me pork knishes all delicious

Wise Wiggles 09-30-2013 11:08 AM

Fresh as it ever was.

Mr. J 09-30-2013 02:55 PM

Interesting style. at first it just seemed like ramblings
which is cool. but it has some lines that pop out at you
good combination of ideas and maybe the idea is foreign to mr
regardless it was quite the read...keep writing

Vulgar 09-30-2013 04:58 PM

lizards change color lisp on the roof lookin at the moon to find proof
alien source insane arabian horse kickin paint pleiadian stars trigger
figure 8 vein mainframe my jab to fast im behind you before the pain delay
to remind you

^This part was hot.

Fast projectiles / no formal style of plating type of approach. Quality content.

brokenhal0 10-01-2013 04:34 AM

thanks my dudes


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