WEEK THREE DISCUSSION

[Master Rock]

Originally Posted by Universe

The "crumble, humble, stumble" section at the end was noticeably bad after the really tremendous material before it. I wish it wasn't there...

No, please....not the crumble mumble jumbo! lol!!!
Nah..but forreal I rushed that part...ugh...you caught it!

Originally Posted by Dominate

The picture is interesting but nothing immediately jumps out at me as an idea to write about. Idk what I'd do with this one.

This is exactly what I thought, I had no idea how to go about this. It was a difficult topic.

Originally Posted by Dominate

I fucking hate your font choice. The good old default verdana size 10 is all you or anyone else ever needs but even if you DID have to change it, this one is too BIG and I DON'T LIKE READING IT.

Lmbo!!!
I won't let it happen again...that's the first time I ever did that. I appreciate you taking your time to change it so you can read it.

Originally Posted by Dominate

A couple of grammatical/wording hiccups such as -
"realities stream" I think you meant "reality's stream"?
"witnessed its expand" I think you meant "witnessed its expanse"?
I'd like to see more multisyllabic rhymes from you.

And thank you for this. That's helpful.