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#18 |
Bags will be avenged
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 12,621
Battle Record: 85-58
Accomplishments - 50+ Wins
Champed - Gimmick Battle League
- 1-2 Punch League (5x)
- Fight Night LXXIX
- Fight Night 4
- Netcees Battle League (2x)
- NPL Roast
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Adverse got this easily halo 4 was hilarious and alone was enough to take the win.
Broken halo. Take the advice you’re given and use it. This isn’t rhyming battle. It’s battle rap. Throw punches. Not just for the sake of rhyme. Write the punch first. Then work on the setup and end rhyme that you’ve already laid out in the punch. You may have to tweak it. Don’t just start writing setups and then be like “ok, what’s the punch???” It doesn’t work ever. V/adverse |
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