Week 4 chat and predictions

[Certain]

@Frank, chill. There are 3 hours, 40 minutes left to vote.

[Mike Wrecka]

@Frank stop free posting in threads. you are giving out wrong information and you are not part of the mod team. we have things under control buddy

[Frank]

mike wheres your verse at little buddy? did you reuse it this week? you think i'm stupid? you posted zero lines , zada and you get the W? Post your default 16 lines, go back in time, edit the thread if you have to. post something. because according to this infamous rule change, you should be 0-3 approaching 0-4, case closed.

at least let the combined 16 lines duke it out or let me slide with a reminder or something man

[Mike Wrecka]

Frank I PMd my verse to Certain for our match up. you should have done the same this week. don't act like this is your first rodeo. you didn't write shit this week. admit it.

[Zen]

I wrote high quality shit this week. It was about the sun and stuff.

[Mike Wrecka]

whoever made that sun topic is clearly a genius

[Zen]

And whoever decided to put me against the sun god with the topic as sun is a dick.

[Mike Wrecka]

we are going back to images next week

[Adonis]

Originally Posted by Zenland

And whoever decided to put me against the sun god with the topic as sun is a dick.

Lmfao

Zen is that dude. As far as I'm concerned if we voted on personality you'd champ

I still hate you though, respectfully of course.

Have we battled?

[breathless]

I voted, do I really have to post links I mean come on, I always hated having to show my work in algebra...

And, Zen, take your cock outta cunt, you write like a fucking papermate

[Adonis]

That shit about middle aged black chick leaned me yo

[breathless]

Originally Posted by Adonis

Half the votes say my flow was good,, the other say it was forced or not good

I wish you motherfuckers would quote the bad so I can see where you feel its bad flow so I can change somethiing and improve. Just saying its forced don't help nobody improve examples kids. Chea!

Daniel was the Class clown; but Only on the Surface,
made his Peers laugh Loud with Every joke Blurted,
(semi colons should only be used to separate items listed as examples after a colon)

(capitalised flow expression points)
Daniel was the Class clown, but Only on the Surface
had his Peers laughin' Loud at ev'ry Joke that he Blurted

Or

Daniel was the Class clown, but Only on the Surface,
he Made his peers laugh Loud at all the Jokes he always Blurted

Flow is so hard to express without a ton of stupid symbols, which would work if everyone adhered to the same symbolizings, but yea, what I'm saying here is the way you have it written there isn't enough natural expression on the "he MADE his peers" part. Mainly because it lacked the filler syllables to give it a speech cadence, but when dealing with filler bits you have to think about consonants that are hard and soft that will blend with their surrounding sounds to cause either a break or runtogether

[YDK]

Originally Posted by Adonis

Lmfao

Zen is that dude. As far as I'm concerned if we voted on personality you'd champ

I still hate you though, respectfully of course.

Have we battled?

Can I get runner up atleast? Frank would definitely be 0-122 if it were personality contest. He's got 37 alias' an all of them have the personality of a piece of white wall paper. Or a horse with a rubberband around its nuts (when it comes to cheating a win)

[YDK]

An yeah, you can sig that shit

[Adonis]

I literally spat on myself @ 0-122

[YDK]

Lmfao trufe

[zygote]

In Franks defense, line limits are kind of ill-defined. If any limits are applicable word limits would be much more precise but individuals would probably not like that idea.

For example, what if Frank submitted with the following formatting instead;

"crab in the bucket
why you ducked kid
get up out of the bucket,
getting hit with a shovel until you dumb kid
you owe me a sandwhich for 365 luncheons
if there sand in the sandwhich
- I dumped it
meet me on union square, i'll throw dust in the blunt kid
nah nigga thats coney island sand it get you crunk kid
hahaha you lucky you sunk syd
- now come and smoke some sour hash
time keeps on
slippin
slippin
slippin.

hour glass"

Is a line a line like a single line of formatted text. Or is a line a complete sentence or something equivalent to a complete sentence?

[patrown]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=25117
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=25120
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=25115

[Frank]

Originally Posted by zygote

In Franks defense, line limits are kind of ill-defined. If any limits are applicable word limits would be much more precise but individuals would probably not like that idea.

For example, what if Frank submitted with the following formatting instead;

"crab in the bucket
why you ducked kid
get up out of the bucket,
getting hit with a shovel until you dumb kid
you owe me a sandwhich for 365 luncheons
if there sand in the sandwhich
- I dumped it
meet me on union square, i'll throw dust in the blunt kid
nah nigga thats coney island sand it get you crunk kid
hahaha you lucky you sunk syd
- now come and smoke some sour hash
time keeps on
slippin
slippin
slippin.

hour glass"

Is a line a line like a single line of formatted text. Or is a line a complete sentence or something equivalent to a complete sentence?

word up that's how it looks on my android.

[breathless]

When you hit enter, that's a line...