Dominate vs. Sharp Nine {Dominate wins}

[Sn00p]

AOBL
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@Dominate @Sharp Nine

[Dominate]

Check, g/l

[Sharp]

Cool, you too bud

[~RustyGunZ~]

@Dominate @Sharp Nine verses are due tonight

[Dominate]

Ext? Sorry. Easter weekend unpredictable

[Sharp]

All good, I'm running around all Easter weekend too

[Dominate]

sent 10 to snoop

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by AOBL Mag

Wag of the Finger @ those stupid pro-gay marriage profile pictures. those things never make any sense and aren't helping any cause. Unless your cause is making everyones profile look the same and making the newsfeed confusing.

Oversized bars ontop a one another - visually thats tha worst shit dude
bad enough its all over fb, then I come here n have to see it in ya verses too
Dom fell off looooong ago, we won't see this cat win
I got here with an Utmost showing every week - hes here cuz that didn't happen
EVERYTHING you writes played as fuck. Everytime theyre quoted makes me mad
Ur bars don't just ring a bell... theyre older than the wheelchair guy from breaking bad
Climbings my thing, I'm the face of doin text well
I change the rankings weekly w/ my Word... you just do it w/ your Excel
Doms grateful for his friends votin his way, guy's stuck on that reliant tip
So if he pulls a victory here, it wont be the only time we see NATO win thanks to alliances

[Dominate]

Been riding dicks a minute here, & ur only rep’s as a fucktard clown kid
If u Carved Out a name for urself it’s above “& Namix 4eva” w/ a love heart round it
I saw u wet urself when he spoke to you – you were delighted to have him supervise
He gave u the theory in Cross Training... I’ll give u the practical of How To Be Crucified
Sn00p’s rushing, but next week’s champ match won’t be Knuck and u..
I’ll be against K Nine... you’ll be hugging ur dog-ugly girlfriend while she comforts you
She a ancient dame w/ ungodly looks, that bitch’s Hair gives the game away
My girl could inspire Erotic Books... your girl is 50 with Shades of Grey
& that Newb tourney you’re in? I predict you’ll get seared & scorched dude
Even IF u make BoreDom a son ... ur mother did THAT 20 years before you

[namix]

This was pretty close tbh, for different reasons. so i broke it down:

Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

Oversized bars ontop a one another - visually thats tha worst shit dude
bad enough its all over fb, then I come here n have to see it in ya verses too
--aight

Dom fell off looooong ago, we won't see this cat win
I got here with an Utmost showing every week - hes here cuz that didn't happen
-- cool 'nuff

EVERYTHING you writes played as fuck. Everytime theyre quoted makes me mad
Ur bars don't just ring a bell... theyre older than the wheelchair guy from breaking bad
-- concept was great, but wording undermined it here... 'bars dont just ring a bell' sounds like, 'they're not only ringing bells, they're enshrined with the whistles on 'em too' -- like it'll be soo remembered. but i see what you were going for clearly... you tried to combine two competing concepts though, with 'they dont ring a bell' and the metaphor for someone who would do more than ring a bell... again, great concept, just mind the wording because this line coulda been a banger

Climbings my thing, I'm the face of doin text well
I change the rankings weekly w/ my Word... you just do it w/ your Excel
--pretty common flip bro, would have had to be way more in-depth complexity-wise and a bit more 'raw' delivery wise (e.g. how your opponent will never Excel to incorporate the word and excel wordplay and then make it like even behind me in the ranking Powerpoints - for the added complexity, that woulda been ill - but this flip didnt have enough behind it this time bro).

Doms grateful for his friends votin his way, guy's stuck on that reliant tip
So if he pulls a victory here, it wont be the only time we see NATO win thanks to alliances
--cool 'nuf

Originally Posted by Dominate

Been riding dicks a minute here, & ur only rep’s as a fucktard clown kid
If u Carved Out a name for urself it’s above “& Namix 4eva” w/ a love heart round it
--cool 'nuf

I saw u wet urself when he spoke to you – you were delighted to have him supervise
He gave u the theory in Cross Training... I’ll give u the practical of How To Be Crucified
--wouldn't have expected you to see it, but tried to get in front of this one in an OM since great minds think a like sir. good thought, im sure most will like it, just didn't resonate for me for obvious reasons

Sn00p’s rushing, but next week’s champ match won’t be Knuck and u..
I’ll be against K Nine... you’ll be hugging ur dog-ugly girlfriend while she comforts you
--cool 'nuff

She a ancient dame w/ ungodly looks, that bitch’s Hair gives the game away
My girl could inspire Erotic Books... your girl is 50 with Shades of Grey
--lol

& that Newb tourney you’re in? I predict you’ll get seared & scorched dude
Even IF u make BoreDom a son ... ur mother did THAT 20 years before you
--cool 'nuff, solid concept, coulda made that 'boredom a son' sound a bit more fluid, but thats one of those i could see playing with for a minute and just saying eff it this should get the point across, so i feel it

both were solid reads but pretty close match for different reasons. I think Sharp had a couple concepts that were great, but the delivery of them just didnt help them reach their potential. I think Dominate had a pretty consistent verse throughout.

this was a close match, pretty consistent verses which for me came down to their haymakers, and that was sharp's breaking bad line vs. 50 shades of grey... the breaking bad one would have edged it out if the wording was polished, but the 50 shades of grey line was one of the funnier lines in the match i'd say.

v-Dominate

it was a pretty even match, with Sharp having been a bar pr so shy from keeping up with Dominate's consistency. good shit fellas.

[Cashius]

Opener, utmost, breaking bad

Vs.

Carved out, 50 shades, boredom

Botw here. Both had two solid quotes and one ok quote...ring bell and 50 shades.

After reading again I gotta go with Dom. Sharps to unquotables were both misses while only 1 of doms missed.

Dominate.

[Lotto Smirk]

Oversized bars ontop a one another - visually thats tha worst shit dude
bad enough its all over fb, then I come here n have to see it in ya verses too
Dom fell off looooong ago, we won't see this cat win
I got here with an Utmost showing every week - hes here cuz that didn't happen
EVERYTHING you writes played as fuck. Everytime theyre quoted makes me mad
Ur bars don't just ring a bell... theyre older than the wheelchair guy from breaking bad

vs

Been riding dicks a minute here, & ur only rep’s as a fucktard clown kid
If u Carved Out a name for urself it’s above “& Namix 4eva” w/ a love heart round it
She a ancient dame w/ ungodly looks, that bitch’s Hair gives the game away
My girl could inspire Erotic Books... your girl is 50 with Shades of Grey

I got sharp taking this with one more quotable dope battle ya'll was very close i had to re-read the battle to decide a winner but im gonna go with sharp just think his quotables hit a lil harder, but thought doms 50 shades line was dope

vote- sharp

[bleak]

I would vote but I try to stay away from Sharp's battles, considering I saw the entire thing being created.

May be a bit biased.

[Sn00p]

Dom fell off looooong ago, we won't see this cat win
I got here with an Utmost showing every week - hes here cuz that didn't happen
Climbings my thing, I'm the face of doin text well
I change the rankings weekly w/ my Word... you just do it w/ your Excel
Doms grateful for his friends votin his way, guy's stuck on that reliant tip
So if he pulls a victory here, it wont be the only time we see NATO win thanks to alliances

vs.

Been riding dicks a minute here, & ur only rep’s as a fucktard clown kid
If u Carved Out a name for urself it’s above “& Namix 4eva” w/ a love heart round it
I saw u wet urself when he spoke to you – you were delighted to have him supervise
He gave u the theory in Cross Training... I’ll give u the practical of How To Be Crucified
She a ancient dame w/ ungodly looks, that bitch’s Hair gives the game away
My girl could inspire Erotic Books... your girl is 50 with Shades of Grey

idk. i think sharp had the more consistent verse here. like dom's k nine line... the wordplay was dope, but the connection to a 'dog-ugly girlfriend' was really loose. and that just didn't hit for me because of that. same with the boredom a son. make someone a son? hmm. yeah. kinda, but it wasn't executed well enough to hit for me. like, the wordplay was there, but you should've flipped it better to make it come across more effortless. sharp's opener was decent, but not hard enough to be a quote. ring a bell should've been worded better, but wasn't bad. so yea, i think sharp's misses are better. his excel line is funny and hits 'cause of that just like dom's 50 shades. but utmost was a little better than carved out imo and nate owin was a bit better than cross training. fuck. i really hate to vote on this. i can see this going the other way for sure, and some might say that i'm biased 'cause it's the contender match. so discount this vote if you want, @Sharp Nine, @Dominate. but i got sharp. dope shit tho. botw for sure.
v/s9

[Orc]

Oversized bars ontop a one another - visually thats tha worst shit dude
bad enough its all over fb, then I come here n have to see it in ya verses too
THIS WAS OK..CREATIVE/RELEVANT..
Dom fell off looooong ago, we won't see this cat win
I got here with an Utmost showing every week - hes here cuz that didn't happen
OBVIOUS FLIP..
EVERYTHING you writes played as fuck. Everytime theyre quoted makes me mad
Ur bars don't just ring a bell... theyre older than the wheelchair guy from breaking bad
THIS WAS COOL, NICE IDEA..
Climbings my thing, I'm the face of doin text well
I change the rankings weekly w/ my Word... you just do it w/ your Excel
GOOD IDEA BAD EXECUTION..
Doms grateful for his friends votin his way, guy's stuck on that reliant tip
So if he pulls a victory here, it wont be the only time we see NATO win thanks to alliances
NOT FEELING

VS
Been riding dicks a minute here, & ur only rep’s as a fucktard clown kid
If u Carved Out a name for urself it’s above “& Namix 4eva” w/ a love heart round it
OK SIMPLE..SLIGHTLY HUMOROUS
I saw u wet urself when he spoke to you – you were delighted to have him supervise
He gave u the theory in Cross Training... I’ll give u the practical of How To Be Crucified
OLD IDEA MIXED WITH RELEVANCE AND CURRENT EVENT, LIKED IT
Sn00p’s rushing, but next week’s champ match won’t be Knuck and u..
I’ll be against K Nine... you’ll be hugging ur dog-ugly girlfriend while she comforts you
COOL HERE
She a ancient dame w/ ungodly looks, that bitch’s Hair gives the game away
My girl could inspire Erotic Books... your girl is 50 with Shades of Grey
NOT FEELING
& that Newb tourney you’re in? I predict you’ll get seared & scorched dude
Even IF u make BoreDom a son ... ur mother did THAT 20 years before you
NAH FORCED CONCEPT AND BAD


COOL BATT..DOMINATE HAD THE MORE CREATIVE AND WELL EXECUTED FLIPS. PRETTY CLOSE I AGREE BUT I THINK DOM HAD IT HERE..VOTE DOMINATE

[RPK]

Oversized bars ontop a one another - visually thats tha worst shit dude
bad enough its all over fb, then I come here n have to see it in ya verses too
EVERYTHING you writes played as fuck. Everytime theyre quoted makes me mad
Ur bars don't just ring a bell... theyre older than the wheelchair guy from breaking bad

vs.

Been riding dicks a minute here, & ur only rep’s as a fucktard clown kid
If u Carved Out a name for urself it’s above “& Namix 4eva” w/ a love heart round it
Sn00p’s rushing, but next week’s champ match won’t be Knuck and u..
I’ll be against K Nine... you’ll be hugging ur dog-ugly girlfriend while she comforts you
She a ancient dame w/ ungodly looks, that bitch’s Hair gives the game away
My girl could inspire Erotic Books... your girl is 50 with Shades of Grey

This was a pretty cool battle. I think Dom got it with one more quotable though.
v/Dominate

[Que]

Sharp was cool for the "FB/Breaking Bad/and although noone else liked it but me...is the Nato alliances line...lol..I dunno why but I dug it.

Dom came with a nice rebuttal with the nice opener that had a good snap to it.Also what made me laugh was when he said the bitch hair gives the game away lol.Funny.Then he had one other so so line.

Close guys...Imma have to go with Dom

V-Dom

[~RustyGunZ~]

Dom fell off looooong ago, we won't see this cat win
I got here with an Utmost showing every week - hes here cuz that didn't happen
EVERYTHING you writes played as fuck. Everytime theyre quoted makes me mad
Ur bars don't just ring a bell... theyre older than the wheelchair guy from breaking bad
Climbings my thing, I'm the face of doin text well
I change the rankings weekly w/ my Word... you just do it w/ your Excel
Doms grateful for his friends votin his way, guy's stuck on that reliant tip
So if he pulls a victory here, it wont be the only time we see NATO win thanks to alliances

pretty solid

vs

Been riding dicks a minute here, & ur only rep’s as a fucktard clown kid
If u Carved Out a name for urself it’s above “& Namix 4eva” w/ a love heart round it
I saw u wet urself when he spoke to you – you were delighted to have him supervise
He gave u the theory in Cross Training... I’ll give u the practical of How To Be Crucified
Sn00p’s rushing, but next week’s champ match won’t be Knuck and u..
I’ll be against K Nine... you’ll be hugging ur dog-ugly girlfriend while she comforts you
She a ancient dame w/ ungodly looks, that bitch’s Hair gives the game away
My girl could inspire Erotic Books... your girl is 50 with Shades of Grey

your name is not duminate so the closer didn't work.

this is close as fuck.. honestly going to go with

v/sharp nine
felt like a mor personal attack. doms lines about the ultimate writer were good but not as direct as the utmost win and excel lines. could go either way but i think sharp pulled the upset

[Maximus]

Utmost showing, word/excel, ring a bell
vs
opener(lolled), cross training and closer..
Hmm, nice read brethren, this has to be the b2b, solid drops from u both. Although yall had equal quotables, i felt dom took this with stronger connections in his first two barz, cool read once again and props to both..
V/dom

[Maximus]

Utmost showing, word/excel, ring a bell
vs
opener(lolled), cross training and closer..
Hmm, nice read brethren, this has to be the b2b, solid drops from u both. Although yall had equal quotables, i felt dom took this with stronger connections in his first two barz, cool read once again and props to both..
V/dom