Fraze 6-3 Vs Lotto Smirk 5-2 - FRAZE WINS

[Allen Knight]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, July 9th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

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First to 5, win by at least two votes
@fraze @Lotto Smirk

[Lotto Smirk]

10 or 12?

[fraze]

either is cool. last person just match

[Lotto Smirk]

Fuck it 14

have trouble with matchups as of late,bein dopes just a wish geek
ya couldn't even eat tic tac so how ya gonna spit fresh this week
bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand
this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand
fraze is loosing it's the blueprint if he try's a gun line bein mean
cause his verses only got that hitman style when it comes to fact that there never seen
contendership match was laughable, but it left his sex life scarred
cause when he seen them knicker lines, fraze just froze & failed to go hard
when you scribe it's forced, while writtens is what Im blessed with
yo wordplay might have some muscle but you damage it with the way you over-stretch it
yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew
she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too
teach him class cus this sad fuck only bores me
but when it comes grading F, this dimwit would get that in all categories

[fraze]

through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black,
cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat...
ya whole style is fabricated… we don’t believe your hood image…
pack it up, it’s been a good gimmick... but leaving is the only way you’re hearing ‘good writtens’
made you my bitch. for my convenience you will strut it like a model.
now what’s in store is me getting paid while these stupid bitches peel off scratch for lotto...
i bukkake sluts with areolas like hockey pucks, slizzered or sober,
quick to give ya chick a jizz makeover… and i’ll shoot a Lot in the face if that bitch come over,
i do my own dirty work… no need to send them boys after you
but after i drive by your crew and snipe you… i’ll hit reverse then send them boys after you
think you can hang? if i you swing… it’s 3 foot high and rising in a maple grove,
but if you pause da noose… I’ll plug one or two and hit you like its the debut of de la soul
don’t wan’t see me angry. I keep a hammer. deadshot aim... stealth like tarantulas...
my iron sparks flames… but when I hit ya bitch... no shield, do i look like Captain America??

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

Fuck it 14

have trouble with matchups as of late,bein dopes just a wish geek
ya couldn't even eat tic tac so how ya gonna spit fresh this week
light but ok..
bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand
this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand
light again but ok its not bad
fraze is loosing it's the blueprint if he try's a gun line bein mean
cause his verses only got that hitman style when it comes to fact that there never seen
ok.. I mean.. I dont get this b, I get it, but it dont work.. his verses are seen.. maybe u could of said his SKILL is like a hitman. thats a diss. thats more effective than this. this is u shooting a blank
contendership match was laughable, but it left his sex life scarred
cause when he seen them knicker lines, fraze just froze & failed to go hard
nah, this is not doing much
when you scribe it's forced, while writtens is what Im blessed with
yo wordplay might have some muscle but you damage it with the way you over-stretch it
not feeling this.. kind of simple bro
yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew
she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too
nice
teach him class cus this sad fuck only bores me
but when it comes grading F, this dimwit would get that in all categories
nah not feeling

Originally Posted by fraze

through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black,
cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat...
ok cool
ya whole style is fabricated… we don’t believe your hood image…
pack it up, it’s been a good gimmick... but leaving is the only way you’re hearing ‘good writtens’
this is so old and played, u might not know this. I just want everyone else reading this to be aware. this is like 99
made you my bitch. for my convenience you will strut it like a model.
now what’s in store is me getting paid while these stupid bitches peel off scratch for lotto...
ok this aight
i bukkake sluts with areolas like hockey pucks, slizzered or sober,
quick to give ya chick a jizz makeover… and i’ll shoot a Lot in the face if that bitch come over,
FIRE
i do my own dirty work… no need to send them boys after you
but after i drive by your crew and snipe you… i’ll hit reverse then send them boys after you
what is this ?
think you can hang? if i you swing… it’s 3 foot high and rising in a maple grove,
but if you pause da noose… I’ll plug one or two and hit you like its the debut of de la soul
naah not for me
don’t wan’t see me angry. I keep a hammer. deadshot aim... stealth like tarantulas...
my iron sparks flames… but when I hit ya bitch... no shield, do i look like Captain America??
light

this could go either way tbh

I had to read it a grip of times
Fraze had what I feel like is the BEST line so I am going to give him the win based off that

but man this was VERY competitive cuz fraze almost got the autoloss bcuz of the good riddance line
alot of misses by both tho, so I let it go

v fraze

[Kill Spree]

have trouble with matchups as of late,bein dopes just a wish geek
ya couldn't even eat tic tac so how ya gonna spit fresh this week
meh
bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand
this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand
light
fraze is loosing it's the blueprint if he try's a gun line bein mean
cause his verses only got that hitman style when it comes to fact that there never seen
ok
contendership match was laughable, but it left his sex life scarred
cause when he seen them knicker lines, fraze just froze & failed to go hard
no
when you scribe it's forced, while writtens is what Im blessed with
yo wordplay might have some muscle but you damage it with the way you over-stretch it
ok
yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew
she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too
meh
teach him class cus this sad fuck only bores me
but when it comes grading F, this dimwit would get that in all categories
weak



through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black,
cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat...
ok
ya whole style is fabricated… we don’t believe your hood image…
pack it up, it’s been a good gimmick... but leaving is the only way you’re hearing ‘good writtens’
i fux wit it
made you my bitch. for my convenience you will strut it like a model.
now what’s in store is me getting paid while these stupid bitches peel off scratch for lotto...
nah
i bukkake sluts with areolas like hockey pucks, slizzered or sober,
quick to give ya chick a jizz makeover… and i’ll shoot a Lot in the face if that bitch come over,
YUP!
i do my own dirty work… no need to send them boys after you
but after i drive by your crew and snipe you… i’ll hit reverse then send them boys after you
nah

think you can hang? if i you swing… it’s 3 foot high and rising in a maple grove,
but if you pause da noose… I’ll plug one or two and hit you like its the debut of de la soul
not feelin this
don’t wan’t see me angry. I keep a hammer. deadshot aim... stealth like tarantulas...
my iron sparks flames… but when I hit ya bitch... no shield, do i look like Captain America??
smh..no u dont


allot of misses here, felt Fraze came with more hitting bars tho. shoot a lot was dope. smirk came with some generic misses here and nothing really connected. so im giving this to Fraze

v/Freaze

[Orc]

have trouble with matchups as of late,bein dopes just a wish geek
ya couldn't even eat tic tac so how ya gonna spit fresh this week
u have to knw this is plaed man
bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand
this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand
current flip but just not harsh
fraze is loosing it's the blueprint if he try's a gun line bein mean
cause his verses only got that hitman style when it comes to fact that there never seen
very basic
contendership match was laughable, but it left his sex life scarred
cause when he seen them knicker lines, fraze just froze & failed to go hard
i suppose
when you scribe it's forced, while writtens is what Im blessed with
yo wordplay might have some muscle but you damage it with the way you over-stretch it
ancient bruh
yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew
she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too
much better. more like this
teach him class cus this sad fuck only bores me
but when it comes grading F, this dimwit would get that in all categories
simple but some creativity shown

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through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black,
cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat...
okay opener
ya whole style is fabricated… we don’t believe your hood image…
pack it up, it’s been a good gimmick... but leaving is the only way you’re hearing ‘good writtens’
old concept done a lot
made you my bitch. for my convenience you will strut it like a model.
now what’s in store is me getting paid while these stupid bitches peel off scratch for lotto...
nice swagger to it, light tho
i bukkake sluts with areolas like hockey pucks, slizzered or sober,
quick to give ya chick a jizz makeover… and i’ll shoot a Lot in the face if that bitch come over,
that was whats up. more like it
i do my own dirty work… no need to send them boys after you
but after i drive by your crew and snipe you… i’ll hit reverse then send them boys after you
naaaaah man
think you can hang? if i you swing… it’s 3 foot high and rising in a maple grove,
but if you pause da noose… I’ll plug one or two and hit you like its the debut of de la soul
creative -- i didnt like it but props still
don’t wan’t see me angry. I keep a hammer. deadshot aim... stealth like tarantulas...
my iron sparks flames… but when I hit ya bitch... no shield, do i look like Captain America??
this was wack bro


fraze got it. liked his ideas better. fresher than lotto this week

[Mr. J]

bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand
this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand

yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew
she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too
^^^^
These lines were the stand out to me, it was a cool verse
but some lines I didn't really fuck with like the tic tac line
& the overstretched line..I felt like it would appeal more with a better flip
but for me it just kind of put me off, nice work though..


through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black,
cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat...
ya whole style is fabricated… we don’t believe your hood image…
pack it up, it’s been a good gimmick... but leaving is the only way you’re hearing ‘good writtens’
^^^^
These were the stand outs for me, that 'good writtens' line snuck by me
I was like whaaaat...but i read it again afterwards and thought it worked
I actually thought that De La Soul reference was pretty cool tbh..
the make up line was pretty funny too...

v/Fraze, I got fraze with this one due to a higher approach on quoatables
Lotto came pretty good but that opener & stretch line kind of felt like a shot in the foot
either way this was a decent battle, I just felt that fraze came across smoother

[Junto]

bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand
this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand
good concept, bad execution... 'such hidden dick' just doesn't hit right
when you scribe it's forced, while writtens is what Im blessed with
yo wordplay might have some muscle but you damage it with the way you over-stretch it
stretched lines been done a lot. this twist wasn't bad to me, no pun intended
yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew
she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too
solid

vs.

through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black,
cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat...
smooth one
made you my bitch. for my convenience you will strut it like a model.
now what’s in store is me getting paid while these stupid bitches peel off scratch for lotto...
not a great concept but not bad
i bukkake sluts with areolas like hockey pucks, slizzered or sober,
quick to give ya chick a jizz makeover… and i’ll shoot a Lot in the face if that bitch come over,
haha pretty good

Cool shit... Lotto had a couple nice concepts, farm / pig play was pretty solid.
A few of em coulda used some changes in wording though and didn't hit.
Fraze had shoot a Lot in the face which was prolly LOTB. Cheshire cat worked well.
Just a little more consistent overall not a huge margin though.

V/ Fraze

[Ronin]

bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand
this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand
this was ur best line but it was still meh. Concept was OK, wording not so much.

yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew
she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too
this was OK but still not great or even good really..idk I wasn't feeling it. I get the ref to his crew but blah

vs.

through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black,
cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat...
I want to like this but i dont cause u just said mad hatter n Cheshire cat. I'll quote it but I don't have to like it.

made you my bitch. for my convenience you will strut it like a model.
now what’s in store is me getting paid while these stupid bitches peel off scratch for lotto...
this barely made it. Concept was OK I thought the rest of it was bad. Should have written this completely diff

i bukkake sluts with areolas like hockey pucks, slizzered or sober,
quick to give ya chick a jizz makeover… and i’ll shoot a Lot in the face if that bitch come over,
best punch of the battle

Overall this was a disappointing battle from two supposed up n comers. Both had some horribly played shit that made me wander how u have wins on ur record. Then both had flashes of genius, lotto only had two good lines tho and I'm stretching the term when I say good bro. Fraze had three good lines but only two of them were actually good. I wanted to vote for lotto soooo bad when I seen that good riddance line but

V/fraze

[Ace]

Lotto had the hitman line i liked.. rest of the verse was lacking to me.. fraze worst lines were better than lotto's worst..plus that cheshire line was nice and best line of the battle for me.. it was enough to put em over the top

v Fraze