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Fraze 6-3 Vs Lotto Smirk 5-2 - FRAZE WINS
Netcees Battle League Season VIII Rules Due Dates:
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For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes @fraze @Lotto Smirk |
10 or 12?
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either is cool. last person just match
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Fuck it 14
have trouble with matchups as of late,bein dopes just a wish geek ya couldn't even eat tic tac so how ya gonna spit fresh this week bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand fraze is loosing it's the blueprint if he try's a gun line bein mean cause his verses only got that hitman style when it comes to fact that there never seen contendership match was laughable, but it left his sex life scarred cause when he seen them knicker lines, fraze just froze & failed to go hard when you scribe it's forced, while writtens is what Im blessed with yo wordplay might have some muscle but you damage it with the way you over-stretch it yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too teach him class cus this sad fuck only bores me but when it comes grading F, this dimwit would get that in all categories |
through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black,
cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat... ya whole style is fabricated… we don’t believe your hood image… pack it up, it’s been a good gimmick... but leaving is the only way you’re hearing ‘good writtens’ made you my bitch. for my convenience you will strut it like a model. now what’s in store is me getting paid while these stupid bitches peel off scratch for lotto... i bukkake sluts with areolas like hockey pucks, slizzered or sober, quick to give ya chick a jizz makeover… and i’ll shoot a Lot in the face if that bitch come over, i do my own dirty work… no need to send them boys after you but after i drive by your crew and snipe you… i’ll hit reverse then send them boys after you think you can hang? if i you swing… it’s 3 foot high and rising in a maple grove, but if you pause da noose… I’ll plug one or two and hit you like its the debut of de la soul don’t wan’t see me angry. I keep a hammer. deadshot aim... stealth like tarantulas... my iron sparks flames… but when I hit ya bitch... no shield, do i look like Captain America?? |
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I had to read it a grip of times Fraze had what I feel like is the BEST line so I am going to give him the win based off that but man this was VERY competitive cuz fraze almost got the autoloss bcuz of the good riddance line alot of misses by both tho, so I let it go v fraze |
have trouble with matchups as of late,bein dopes just a wish geek
ya couldn't even eat tic tac so how ya gonna spit fresh this week meh bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand light fraze is loosing it's the blueprint if he try's a gun line bein mean cause his verses only got that hitman style when it comes to fact that there never seen ok contendership match was laughable, but it left his sex life scarred cause when he seen them knicker lines, fraze just froze & failed to go hard no when you scribe it's forced, while writtens is what Im blessed with yo wordplay might have some muscle but you damage it with the way you over-stretch it ok yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too meh teach him class cus this sad fuck only bores me but when it comes grading F, this dimwit would get that in all categories weak through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black, cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat... ok ya whole style is fabricated… we don’t believe your hood image… pack it up, it’s been a good gimmick... but leaving is the only way you’re hearing ‘good writtens’ i fux wit it made you my bitch. for my convenience you will strut it like a model. now what’s in store is me getting paid while these stupid bitches peel off scratch for lotto... nah i bukkake sluts with areolas like hockey pucks, slizzered or sober, quick to give ya chick a jizz makeover… and i’ll shoot a Lot in the face if that bitch come over, YUP! i do my own dirty work… no need to send them boys after you but after i drive by your crew and snipe you… i’ll hit reverse then send them boys after you nah think you can hang? if i you swing… it’s 3 foot high and rising in a maple grove, but if you pause da noose… I’ll plug one or two and hit you like its the debut of de la soul not feelin this don’t wan’t see me angry. I keep a hammer. deadshot aim... stealth like tarantulas... my iron sparks flames… but when I hit ya bitch... no shield, do i look like Captain America?? smh..no u dont allot of misses here, felt Fraze came with more hitting bars tho. shoot a lot was dope. smirk came with some generic misses here and nothing really connected. so im giving this to Fraze v/Freaze |
have trouble with matchups as of late,bein dopes just a wish geek
ya couldn't even eat tic tac so how ya gonna spit fresh this week u have to knw this is plaed man bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand current flip but just not harsh fraze is loosing it's the blueprint if he try's a gun line bein mean cause his verses only got that hitman style when it comes to fact that there never seen very basic contendership match was laughable, but it left his sex life scarred cause when he seen them knicker lines, fraze just froze & failed to go hard i suppose when you scribe it's forced, while writtens is what Im blessed with yo wordplay might have some muscle but you damage it with the way you over-stretch it ancient bruh yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too much better. more like this teach him class cus this sad fuck only bores me but when it comes grading F, this dimwit would get that in all categories simple but some creativity shown - through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black, cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat... okay opener ya whole style is fabricated… we don’t believe your hood image… pack it up, it’s been a good gimmick... but leaving is the only way you’re hearing ‘good writtens’ old concept done a lot made you my bitch. for my convenience you will strut it like a model. now what’s in store is me getting paid while these stupid bitches peel off scratch for lotto... nice swagger to it, light tho i bukkake sluts with areolas like hockey pucks, slizzered or sober, quick to give ya chick a jizz makeover… and i’ll shoot a Lot in the face if that bitch come over, that was whats up. more like it i do my own dirty work… no need to send them boys after you but after i drive by your crew and snipe you… i’ll hit reverse then send them boys after you naaaaah man think you can hang? if i you swing… it’s 3 foot high and rising in a maple grove, but if you pause da noose… I’ll plug one or two and hit you like its the debut of de la soul creative -- i didnt like it but props still don’t wan’t see me angry. I keep a hammer. deadshot aim... stealth like tarantulas... my iron sparks flames… but when I hit ya bitch... no shield, do i look like Captain America?? this was wack bro fraze got it. liked his ideas better. fresher than lotto this week |
bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand
this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too ^^^^ These lines were the stand out to me, it was a cool verse but some lines I didn't really fuck with like the tic tac line & the overstretched line..I felt like it would appeal more with a better flip but for me it just kind of put me off, nice work though.. through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black, cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat... ya whole style is fabricated… we don’t believe your hood image… pack it up, it’s been a good gimmick... but leaving is the only way you’re hearing ‘good writtens’ ^^^^ These were the stand outs for me, that 'good writtens' line snuck by me I was like whaaaat...but i read it again afterwards and thought it worked I actually thought that De La Soul reference was pretty cool tbh.. the make up line was pretty funny too... v/Fraze, I got fraze with this one due to a higher approach on quoatables Lotto came pretty good but that opener & stretch line kind of felt like a shot in the foot either way this was a decent battle, I just felt that fraze came across smoother |
bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand
this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand good concept, bad execution... 'such hidden dick' just doesn't hit right when you scribe it's forced, while writtens is what Im blessed with yo wordplay might have some muscle but you damage it with the way you over-stretch it stretched lines been done a lot. this twist wasn't bad to me, no pun intended yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too solid vs. through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black, cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat... smooth one made you my bitch. for my convenience you will strut it like a model. now what’s in store is me getting paid while these stupid bitches peel off scratch for lotto... not a great concept but not bad i bukkake sluts with areolas like hockey pucks, slizzered or sober, quick to give ya chick a jizz makeover… and i’ll shoot a Lot in the face if that bitch come over, haha pretty good Cool shit... Lotto had a couple nice concepts, farm / pig play was pretty solid. A few of em coulda used some changes in wording though and didn't hit. Fraze had shoot a Lot in the face which was prolly LOTB. Cheshire cat worked well. Just a little more consistent overall not a huge margin though. V/ Fraze |
bitching about battles on the down low, sold ya self out of a fly brand
this bitch is such hidden dick, kan swears he saw ya services in Thailand this was ur best line but it was still meh. Concept was OK, wording not so much. yo girls a ugly slut, behind ya back she's fucked around with all ya crew she hangs arounds the farm all day & the pig looks like she lives there too this was OK but still not great or even good really..idk I wasn't feeling it. I get the ref to his crew but blah vs. through the looking glass you see a queen… i see a g dressed in black, cap backwards, no mad hatter… but i’ll make smirk disappear quicker than the cheshire cat... I want to like this but i dont cause u just said mad hatter n Cheshire cat. I'll quote it but I don't have to like it. made you my bitch. for my convenience you will strut it like a model. now what’s in store is me getting paid while these stupid bitches peel off scratch for lotto... this barely made it. Concept was OK I thought the rest of it was bad. Should have written this completely diff i bukkake sluts with areolas like hockey pucks, slizzered or sober, quick to give ya chick a jizz makeover… and i’ll shoot a Lot in the face if that bitch come over, best punch of the battle Overall this was a disappointing battle from two supposed up n comers. Both had some horribly played shit that made me wander how u have wins on ur record. Then both had flashes of genius, lotto only had two good lines tho and I'm stretching the term when I say good bro. Fraze had three good lines but only two of them were actually good. I wanted to vote for lotto soooo bad when I seen that good riddance line but V/fraze |
Lotto had the hitman line i liked.. rest of the verse was lacking to me.. fraze worst lines were better than lotto's worst..plus that cheshire line was nice and best line of the battle for me.. it was enough to put em over the top
v Fraze |
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