hippocampin

brokenhal0 · 08-11-2013, 05:27 AM

ancient god guild a hard shell soft serve the carvel
weight off my shoulders reality's barbell the stars tell a story
remarks that are corny heart fights the dick that is horny
thorny scabs embrace the crown fall from glory come back
true story thats where real loves at above that i dwell in a space
the real thugs rap living in hell with a dub sack stinkin
like mothballs flying in the light of your porch halls
porche doors close twin turbo out the lane
a corpse rose electric ciruit with the morose
id take the fork in the road and tune in
riding a mongoose threw union st charged with nuclear fusion
drown in a thought cant swim
and if you sink to the bottom and drink to the bottom
get em or got em falling angles tetris slight of hand head shift
enticed by bright lights and fears highlights they scab twilight zone
want you to trade your light for theres my dears you hearing things
no fear we here in chains go head jump out the dream
sort out the ones that will skeeme ill pluck out there regime
deep thinker shit inception 90 degree abyss geomatrix hood basics

Split · 08-11-2013, 08:37 AM

drown in a thought cant swim
and if you sink to the bottom and drink to the bottom
get em or got em falling angles tetris slight of hand head shift

nice!

veritas · 08-11-2013, 09:47 AM

This was dope. Loved the last line. Post more.

Eŋg · 08-21-2013, 08:34 PM

jewel droppin'

PiE · 08-22-2013, 07:41 AM

I liked the start and the finish, which is odd cuz alot of the middle, I want to fond of. I like thyme flow in verses and this had a different kind of spoken word kind of flow, but I got into that with this piece.. you did it pretty well.

brokenhal0 · 08-23-2013, 05:07 AM

thanks for the feedback

08-11-2013, 05:27 AM	#1
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	hippocampin ancient god guild a hard shell soft serve the carvel weight off my shoulders reality's barbell the stars tell a story remarks that are corny heart fights the dick that is horny thorny scabs embrace the crown fall from glory come back true story thats where real loves at above that i dwell in a space the real thugs rap living in hell with a dub sack stinkin like mothballs flying in the light of your porch halls porche doors close twin turbo out the lane a corpse rose electric ciruit with the morose id take the fork in the road and tune in riding a mongoose threw union st charged with nuclear fusion drown in a thought cant swim and if you sink to the bottom and drink to the bottom get em or got em falling angles tetris slight of hand head shift enticed by bright lights and fears highlights they scab twilight zone want you to trade your light for theres my dears you hearing things no fear we here in chains go head jump out the dream sort out the ones that will skeeme ill pluck out there regime deep thinker shit inception 90 degree abyss geomatrix hood basics Last edited by brokenhal0; 08-11-2013 at 05:53 AM.

08-11-2013, 08:37 AM	#2
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	drown in a thought cant swim and if you sink to the bottom and drink to the bottom get em or got em falling angles tetris slight of hand head shift nice! __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

08-22-2013, 07:41 AM	#5
PiE el es a la mode Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: slice of heaven Posts: 94 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 37	I liked the start and the finish, which is odd cuz alot of the middle, I want to fond of. I like thyme flow in verses and this had a different kind of spoken word kind of flow, but I got into that with this piece.. you did it pretty well. __________________

08-21-2013, 08:34 PM	#4
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	jewel droppin'

08-23-2013, 05:07 AM	#6
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	thanks for the feedback