hippocampin
 

ancient god guild a hard shell soft serve the carvel
weight off my shoulders reality's barbell the stars tell a story
remarks that are corny heart fights the dick that is horny
thorny scabs embrace the crown fall from glory come back
true story thats where real loves at above that i dwell in a space
the real thugs rap living in hell with a dub sack stinkin
like mothballs flying in the light of your porch halls
porche doors close twin turbo out the lane
a corpse rose electric ciruit with the morose
id take the fork in the road and tune in
riding a mongoose threw union st charged with nuclear fusion
drown in a thought cant swim
and if you sink to the bottom and drink to the bottom
get em or got em falling angles tetris slight of hand head shift
enticed by bright lights and fears highlights they scab twilight zone
want you to trade your light for theres my dears you hearing things
no fear we here in chains go head jump out the dream
sort out the ones that will skeeme ill pluck out there regime
deep thinker shit inception 90 degree abyss geomatrix hood basics

drown in a thought cant swim
and if you sink to the bottom and drink to the bottom
get em or got em falling angles tetris slight of hand head shift

nice!

This was dope. Loved the last line. Post more.

jewel droppin'

I liked the start and the finish, which is odd cuz alot of the middle, I want to fond of. I like thyme flow in verses and this had a different kind of spoken word kind of flow, but I got into that with this piece.. you did it pretty well.

thanks for the feedback