First draft is complete.

[veritas]

Second novel, Squad. Stiving forward towards order.

I also discovered the movie Brainstorm from 1983 and the synchronicities got weird, because our stories are similar in a way.

Fascinating.

Dear diary posthumously.

Down to battle again. Get at me.

[veritas]

Message from future self: purchase the Mind and Brain by Sir John.

Leave this here.

[veritas]

The test of making characters that have to try to not be characters.

[White LGI]

Mid life crisis

[uh-oh]

congratulations

my problem with characters is making them different entities when speaking. somewhere down the line i write them all the same.

[~RustyGunZ~]

Originally Posted by veritas

The test of making characters that have to try to not be characters.

Dan Harmon has a lot of good to say about writing characters

One thing that's stuck with me is making sure every character sees themselves as good, and that they have a goal. Basically making them as human as possible by focusing on who they are vs. what they say.

Once you have that, never making a character do something that doesn't benefit their goals or break the 4th wall about their place in the story

[White LGI]

Originally Posted by uh-oh

congratulations

my problem with characters is making them different entities when speaking. somewhere down the line i write them all the same.

Whats up,***

[Chyeahhh!!!]

Brainstorm excellent flick

[veritas]

Originally Posted by Chyeahhh!!!

Brainstorm excellent flick

what is crazy is that the book is similar to the movie and I never even knew the movie existed until the week I finished it.

whooooo

[veritas]

Originally Posted by Knucklehead

Dan Harmon has a lot of good to say about writing characters

One thing that's stuck with me is making sure every character sees themselves as good, and that they have a goal. Basically making them as human as possible by focusing on who they are vs. what they say.

Once you have that, never making a character do something that doesn't benefit their goals or break the 4th wall about their place in the story

Yes. Agreed upon the characters have to believe they are good.

[veritas]

Shout out to Jude Colavito and Victor Hernandez though.

[Ghost1]

Excited to read

Is this a sequel to hyperbole? Or a stand alone ?

[veritas]

Both sir. You will see.

[White LGI]

While i was gone did a clear winner of best beard ever become known between veritas and uhoh?

[uh-oh]

veritas' beard and hair style are just another futile attempt at currying my favor through idolism. i must say its working though. he has a solid beard. i'd like to see it in context. a beard can seem more impressive than it truly is due to the size of the person flourishing it. he might have a pin head for instance, where as im a 7 7/8 head fat monster. i think he is 5'7 149. hats probably 7 1/4. also he keeps his beard like a woman, where as mine just does what it does.

i commend him for rocking the bald head and beard though

on that note i just put a fresh shave on my noggin and im in heaven. bought super legit razors and gel. i got a really expensive set of clippers that basically take it all the way to skin so i've been lazy with it just buzzing it all down with those, and calling it a day. but i took my time and shaved the fuck out of my head, against the grain numerous times just staying lubed up with the gel and good razor. its smooth as fuck. i want to lube it up and put it in a butthole up to my brows

[White LGI]

Originally Posted by uh-oh

veritas' beard and hair style are just another futile attempt at currying my favor through idolism. i must say its working though. he has a solid beard. i'd like to see it in context. a beard can seem more impressive than it truly is due to the size of the person flourishing it. he might have a pin head for instance, where as im a 7 7/8 head fat monster. i think he is 5'7 149. hats probably 7 1/4. also he keeps his beard like a woman, where as mine just does what it does.

i commend him for rocking the bald head and beard though

on that note i just put a fresh shave on my noggin and im in heaven. bought super legit razors and gel. i got a really expensive set of clippers that basically take it all the way to skin so i've been lazy with it just buzzing it all down with those, and calling it a day. but i took my time and shaved the fuck out of my head, against the grain numerous times just staying lubed up with the gel and good razor. its smooth as fuck. i want to lube it up and put it in a butthole up to my brows

Slow down c.a.c.....i speak nigger...that shits above my naps

[veritas]

Originally Posted by uh-oh

veritas' beard and hair style are just another futile attempt at currying my favor through idolism. i must say its working though. he has a solid beard. i'd like to see it in context. a beard can seem more impressive than it truly is due to the size of the person flourishing it. he might have a pin head for instance, where as im a 7 7/8 head fat monster. i think he is 5'7 149. hats probably 7 1/4. also he keeps his beard like a woman, where as mine just does what it does.

i commend him for rocking the bald head and beard though

on that note i just put a fresh shave on my noggin and im in heaven. bought super legit razors and gel. i got a really expensive set of clippers that basically take it all the way to skin so i've been lazy with it just buzzing it all down with those, and calling it a day. but i took my time and shaved the fuck out of my head, against the grain numerous times just staying lubed up with the gel and good razor. its smooth as fuck. i want to lube it up and put it in a butthole up to my brows

5’11 175-180. I think my hat size 71/8?

[Saint]

never heard of brainstorm - ima check it out

[Immolate]

now throw it in the trash

[White LGI]

Originally Posted by Immolate

now throw it in the trash

C.a.c on c.a.c hate