First draft is complete.
 

Second novel, Squad. Stiving forward towards order.

I also discovered the movie Brainstorm from 1983 and the synchronicities got weird, because our stories are similar in a way.

Fascinating.

Dear diary posthumously.

Down to battle again. Get at me.

Message from future self: purchase the Mind and Brain by Sir John.

Leave this here.

The test of making characters that have to try to not be characters.

Mid life crisis

congratulations

my problem with characters is making them different entities when speaking. somewhere down the line i write them all the same.

Dan Harmon has a lot of good to say about writing characters

One thing that's stuck with me is making sure every character sees themselves as good, and that they have a goal. Basically making them as human as possible by focusing on who they are vs. what they say.

Once you have that, never making a character do something that doesn't benefit their goals or break the 4th wall about their place in the story

Whats up,***

Brainstorm excellent flick

what is crazy is that the book is similar to the movie and I never even knew the movie existed until the week I finished it.

whooooo

Yes. Agreed upon the characters have to believe they are good.

Shout out to Jude Colavito and Victor Hernandez though.

Excited to read

Is this a sequel to hyperbole? Or a stand alone ?

Both sir. You will see.

While i was gone did a clear winner of best beard ever become known between veritas and uhoh?

veritas' beard and hair style are just another futile attempt at currying my favor through idolism. i must say its working though. he has a solid beard. i'd like to see it in context. a beard can seem more impressive than it truly is due to the size of the person flourishing it. he might have a pin head for instance, where as im a 7 7/8 head fat monster. i think he is 5'7 149. hats probably 7 1/4. also he keeps his beard like a woman, where as mine just does what it does.

i commend him for rocking the bald head and beard though

on that note i just put a fresh shave on my noggin and im in heaven. bought super legit razors and gel. i got a really expensive set of clippers that basically take it all the way to skin so i've been lazy with it just buzzing it all down with those, and calling it a day. but i took my time and shaved the fuck out of my head, against the grain numerous times just staying lubed up with the gel and good razor. its smooth as fuck. i want to lube it up and put it in a butthole up to my brows

Slow down c.a.c.....i speak nigger...that shits above my naps

5’11 175-180. I think my hat size 71/8?

never heard of brainstorm - ima check it out

now throw it in the trash

C.a.c on c.a.c hate