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Old 05-07-2015, 07:47 AM   #1
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Picture Painted with Manipulation of the English Language..
writers Languish, from Emotional Pain and Physical Ailments- health complications.
smile for a While wth my Wealth Of Connotations, randomly Placed in my scripts with Borrowed Phrases.
doubting, what we See with Our Own gazes, pointlessly seeking what Our own place is.
observing and commenting on a society Stuck in the races
a topical featuring our ThoughtsUpon a Man who Thought'e 'ad made it
laced with similes richer than Saudi Arabia describing'is misery..

..&maestros See-thru-my-Nonsense wholly aware that it's Read-worthy content..
needing no Respect 'r Mention i'm a Frame of Reference amusing myself with silly Games.until you Ended it.
it must have been the Lack-of-atTention-Paid
or perhaps your psycha logical thriller Left me stressed for Days.
per-haps your Exe-cution of your favorite muses was a Heart Electrocution
leaving me with crusty Eyes wishing for numbness again- about my Woman again
(jealousy's Not the Word- i'm not concerned)..
..(it wasn't so much a "Mindfuck" as a body blow, and Time stopped)

..Yo,
i beCame a paranoid manic in a panic when they said they were watching me like a Crow..
This Was Years ago..
My,how everything changes
Yes i'm so Rational i'm enticed by infomercials with hydroxycut,for weight loss.
yes i'm so passionate i had a stanza,
but it turned into a multisyllabic extravaganza.
and i'd already Coached Newcomers--
when they Asked Me What Rap's About i preTended I Had An Answer..
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Picture painted with manipulation of the English language. Writers languish, from emotional pain and physical ailments- health complications. Smile for a while wth my wealth of connotations, randomly placed in my scripts with borrowed phrases. Doubting.What we see with our own gazes, pointlessly seeking what our own place is. Observing and commenting on a society stuck in the races. A topical featuring our thoughts-upon a man who thought'e 'ad made it[,]laced with similes richer than Saudi Arabia describing'is Misery..
..And maestros see thru my nonsense wholly aware that it's read-worthy content..
Needing no respect 'r mention i'm a frame of reference amusing myself with silly games.until you ended it. It must've been the lack of attention paid. Or perhaps your psycha logical thriller left me stressed for days. Perhaps your execution of your favorite muses was a heart electrocution leaving me with crusty Eyes wishing for numbness again- about my woman again: Jealousy's not the word/i'm not concerned. It wasn't so much a "Mindfuck" as a body blow,and time stopped..
..Yo, I became a paranoid manic-in-a-panic when they said they were watching me like a Crow. This was years ago. My, how everything changes. Yes I'm so rational I'm enticed by infomercials with hydroxycut,fer weight loss. Yes I'm so passionate I had a stanza, but it turned into a multi-syllabic extravaganza. And I'd already coached newcomers.. When they asked me what rap's about I pretended I had an answer.

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