universe - at his best that's how it's done on point in every area
scar - some of this sounded reads like dialogue
its not rhymeable it lacked flow or ''bboyism'' in certain areas
i felt you killed momentum of some epic shit which made it read
like a story written in a book instead of a hip hop verse
but there were moments of brilliance in certain lines just wished it had more hiphop style then story style
my opinion
mvgt- universe
Last edited by brokenhal0; 12-12-2022 at 08:24 AM.
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