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Old 12-12-2022, 08:20 AM   #4
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universe - at his best that's how it's done on point in every area

scar - some of this sounded reads like dialogue
its not rhymeable it lacked flow or ''bboyism'' in certain areas
i felt you killed momentum of some epic shit which made it read
like a story written in a book instead of a hip hop verse
but there were moments of brilliance in certain lines just wished it had more hiphop style then story style
my opinion

mvgt- universe

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