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Old 07-29-2022, 12:23 AM   #6
brokenhal0
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Join Date: Jun 2013
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Battle Record: 12-12=4


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Eviction - Not your best but definitely on point after reading your verses all these weeks i can tell when your on and while this was a good written with good flow
it did lack a bit of detail and some bars felt a bit forced and lacked the emotional connection that you tend to introduce in your characters.

NYC - Not your best either but i feel like your story had more focus and content
then your opponent lyrically some of it was a bit choppy but after last weeks battle theres no need to get that deep I feel like you matched your opponents energy with a more interesting story and that was enough for the W.


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