Team Alpha - Camp Bell & Lyfza Gamble

[Sho Money EMG]

Camp Bizzy

student betrayed teacher, influence became dealer
guess the school should pay a tutor wage in reefer
I'm really a genius, insane heathen, i've proved this
it's confusing, i just be playing this strange linguist
using henney to think with, while my brain drinking
abusing plain english in some lucid chain sequence
i got this unusual two cents, the face of abe leaking
n'i do it daydreaming while loose as change, keep it
you fools favor beefing? my food seen major season
confucius, cooking the plate that judas ate with jesus
i'm in a groove, spraying ether, spewing trade secrets
my shooting range deeper than a ruger neigh keyed in
taking a brutal lane to reach, then rude awake sleepers
i go the google way, with an array of kruger aim features
thats the chrome, new displays, no computer play neither
duke nukem raised me on the moon, ya future way bleaker
deuce-deuce, this a lose-lose, once the dual lasers link up.....

Gam Gritty

I'm moving way sleeker then these foolish lame teachers
On the move agayn, I'm smooth w/ aim when my boomerang reach yuh.
Il truly make a ruthless name once I shoot to FAME, these punks..
Are fools if they think that I won't pull a move of strength like I'm Dave Bautista.
I'm megaton to these hating slobs.. But I ain't Lebron
More an ancient God or the savior sought to replace his throne.
Don't gotta egg em on, I became involved in sake of all these raving cons.
I was the Major on applying Payne upon these fakers b4 it was Damon's job.
So once I contest I'm upping the bet.
U don't want it and I promise you'll b stuck in regret.
In the closet where u gonna get left,
a mobster puzzled w/ stress, I'm Brasco cuttin ya flesh.
I be the monster under the bed...
Gamble w/ ya life an I guarantee u won't cover the spread.
Feet dangling.. Hung from ya neck.
U heard the kid was murderous so what the fuck u expect?
I be the hit man... Blood in my breath,
I'm somewhat ahead how I kilt everyone that u was running to get.
I'm coming for death.. I'm someone you is gonna respect.
So I'll punish till theirs none of u left.

[Clayray]

Flames.. Really good looks from both.

[veritas]

camps flowed smooth.

Gamble some of your words could use some tweaking, but you had flurries of dopeness in your conceptual linking and execution! props@!

[Sho Money EMG]

Word gl

[CopyPat]

hahaha holy shit this flowed. good job fella's. I enjoyed it. camp had lots a good lines. the neigh bit got my, i liked the reference haha. gamble i thought u kept up with camp on this too so really impressive. only thing with urs was the ending was too abrupt., it needed one more line as it read like u ended on the 3rd line instead of the 4th.. if u know what i mean?? only criticism is that ur vocab was a little soft. the syllables rhyming were awesome but if you could add a little more complexity with your word choices it would be a lot doper. nonetheless a good entertaining read. stay up

[Sho Money EMG]

Thanks Pat