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Old 09-02-2014, 11:26 PM   #1
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my stroke dirty, its so nerdy when i go qwerty
i start to flow herpes, my soul burning with no mercy
i'm a cold earthling with bold flurries of whoa! wording
i go to church early wit whole birdies of dope chirping
yo this dose worthy of the pope purging his own clergy
til he nose yearning for blow servings....so don't irk me
i'm bout to smoke earthy then go surf on stone workings
my bones sturdy from the hormones of a cloned hercules
ima jerk in lowkey, fuck a notable speech, i post perfectly
i'll never thirst for faux feed, these quotes deserves drinks
edgar allen poe on jack and coke in gladiator action mode
masterful assassin, actually known to attack with poems
fuck saving face, i just changed the pace into blatant rage
shaving with damon wayans razor blade from a stash i own
i slashed this note with a scalpel stole from joans surgery
"who so alpha tho?" in the scalp of foes to boast purposely
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Old 09-03-2014, 01:21 AM   #2
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Dope shit son.

Will edit w/ more feed
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Old 09-03-2014, 01:24 AM   #3
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hahahahah this was awesome as fuck. dopeness. this had swag and i never say that gay shit. but this wasn't gay. loved the whole thing

u got aim? should aim cyphr G
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Old 09-03-2014, 04:46 AM   #4
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Dope bro. Shit was A-1, flowed like wet pussy
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the lines flowed very well -- I gave it a +
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Old 09-03-2014, 10:06 PM   #6
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hahahahah this was awesome as fuck. dopeness. this had swag and i never say that gay shit. but this wasn't gay. loved the whole thing

u got aim? should aim cyphr G
just made it. Wax Camp. im down for it bro, hit me up
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Old 09-03-2014, 10:43 PM   #7
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Old 09-04-2014, 12:26 AM   #8
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This is too easy for you and it's too easy for me.

It's cool, tho, and it's fun that it's so easy, huh?
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Old 09-04-2014, 09:02 PM   #9
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well worth the read. i havent been online much, and this was something dope to come back to. sick rhymes man
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Old 09-06-2014, 10:57 PM   #10
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keep this up!!!!!
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Old 09-07-2014, 12:10 AM   #11
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You started off pretty good, during the middle the flow and certain concepts were a bit choppy if not confusing like the faux line for example. The ending picked up the flow again, Nice scheme overall bro
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