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my stroke dirty, its so nerdy when i go qwerty
i start to flow herpes, my soul burning with no mercy i'm a cold earthling with bold flurries of whoa! wording i go to church early wit whole birdies of dope chirping yo this dose worthy of the pope purging his own clergy til he nose yearning for blow servings....so don't irk me i'm bout to smoke earthy then go surf on stone workings my bones sturdy from the hormones of a cloned hercules ima jerk in lowkey, fuck a notable speech, i post perfectly i'll never thirst for faux feed, these quotes deserves drinks edgar allen poe on jack and coke in gladiator action mode masterful assassin, actually known to attack with poems fuck saving face, i just changed the pace into blatant rage shaving with damon wayans razor blade from a stash i own i slashed this note with a scalpel stole from joans surgery "who so alpha tho?" in the scalp of foes to boast purposely
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Dope shit son.
Will edit w/ more feed
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Mic Check
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hahahahah this was awesome as fuck. dopeness. this had swag and i never say that gay shit. but this wasn't gay. loved the whole thing
u got aim? should aim cyphr G
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6ft of Seperation
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Dope bro. Shit was A-1, flowed like wet pussy
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the lines flowed very well -- I gave it a +
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just made it. Wax Camp. im down for it bro, hit me up
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sick
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This is too easy for you and it's too easy for me.
It's cool, tho, and it's fun that it's so easy, huh? |
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well worth the read. i havent been online much, and this was something dope to come back to. sick rhymes man
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keep this up!!!!!
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You started off pretty good, during the middle the flow and certain concepts were a bit choppy if not confusing like the faux line for example. The ending picked up the flow again, Nice scheme overall bro
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