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08-14-2014, 03:10 PM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
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Wake Em Up Yung Gritty & Kin (AUDIO)
Beat by- Kin
verse 1- Yung Gritty hook Verse 2 -Kin WAKE UP...we're here https://soundcloud.com/its-kin/wake-...eat-yunggritty <iframe width="100%" height="450" scrolling="no" frameborder="no" src="https://w.soundcloud.com/player/?url=https%3A//api.soundcloud.com/tracks/163155568&auto_play=false&hide_related=fal se&show_comments=true&show_user=true&s how_reposts=false&visual=true"></iframe> Last edited by Kin; 08-14-2014 at 03:41 PM. |
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08-14-2014, 11:36 PM
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I just listened and this was great. Will leave better feed later, but for now this was really good quality. Especially the beat.
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08-15-2014, 01:19 AM
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This was of good quality. It had a raw gritty esque to it. Albeit, the lyrics could of been more intricate. Don't be afraid to be a full blown lyricist. I will say you were more on point than the first individual. You also have a good voice. But I do feel you can improve your presence by 1. make sure your lyrics are more powerful in terms of depth, content, and complexity. All the while remaining on tune with the melody at hand. I'm sure you can do it because you are talented. However, you are still not wielding the full capacity of your aptitude. You can still sound good even while exposing your knack for rap's inner science, which is just a term to denote the lyrical prowess one can explore.
Thank you for the chance to listen. Keep making tracks, and I'll gladly give my input if you bless and allow me with the opportunity. |
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08-15-2014, 07:35 PM
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gritty is that fuckin' dude!! hahaha, yo this is dope as fuck. i can't hate on any of this
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08-16-2014, 05:27 PM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
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Ay...thankz for the.listen fellaz
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08-18-2014, 12:57 AM
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fucking sick guys. enjoyed this a lot. both verses were crazy. so was the beat. major props
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08-18-2014, 03:26 PM
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First dude was awesome, probably the least Soundclick-rapper sounding person I've listened to on here. Didn't listen to second dude, sorry audio isn't really my thing.
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08-20-2014, 08:42 AM
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Wow yeah this was tight, dope lyrics, beat and flow.
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