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yo maybe it makes a bigger difference than i thought to actually have a set up and program to edit with, rather than having to get the track right or mostly right within one take due to a voice memo, but i just thought i'd be able to lay it better than i did
the lyrics are all there. it's the rapping that sucks. and i'm pissed off. someone come in with not-too harsh of advice but honest. i didnt like that beat to begin with but damn, this was bad |
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^so leaned
Don't be so hard on yourself. Just take it one step at a time and try to arrive at a point where you have better equipment, a good quality recording program and a moment of solace to put it all together. |
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@Badi Alii I'm 100% positive Vulgar is secretly crushing on you. He's that type of dude.
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baldi alli literally sayed vulgar could smash whenever.
literally typed that out. so.
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For some reason I'm not okay with that.
Am I jealous? I'm not sure yet Continue with thread
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LMAO "Mic check Round 1" starts out h core and murks ur latest one.
edit: hhaha u go in on "the introduction" too. u def just keep ur first takes. even with full out mistakes and redos lolol u just need to keep recording. only way to get better. either that or do a few takes until u get one ur happy with. seems like u usually just keep ur first one and bam throw it together also hahahahaahahahahahahah @halfcake's post
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I felt like it started real strong....I think if ur not gonna break down an buy equipment...then get a app that will be better...two track recorder at least makes.it.so u can record with the beat and add a track for.doubles...try that for now and u will be happier on your finished projects juz based on the quality....cuz the writing game is already there
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:(
I can't believe you forfeit.
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I don't want people hearing that bullshit when I can spit so much better than that @Seadad. You know I can. And I only forfeited this round, I want to be a part of the 3rd one so I can make up for it. Last night I fell asleep obsessing and woke up w it on my mind. So round 3 keepin my fingers crossed
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Back again.
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I thought this was single elimination
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It is.
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Well then bodey you are a lost soul and meth is very worried.
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lol'd irl.
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Badi, you're dismissed. Let the men do what you don't do best.
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Battle Fig in the BA !
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Yeah I'll totally show...
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