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Coolest Story Ever Bro..
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Its Too Late to apologize...its too late
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ya threats light u take on gold diggers to have a sex life..
Ill end him n snatch his fortune a robins a given as i wreck mic Robin Givens..ruined tyson |
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this is a walk in the park for sure, but I aint gonna let that slide, ^
ever see Saw? u get tortured more when we collide
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Ctrl alt elite using "wreck mic" ruined his. Dece concept, not so good wording.
Mikes was simple. But it hit enough or him to win IMO. V/ MW |
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didn't like undead's flip tbh... kinda felt like compressed longbar. coulda been reworded a lot better
mike's was kinda dull but done well enough to hit eh........ close but i edge it to mike v/mike |
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Both were ehh tbh but mike was slightly better
v/mike |
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Horrid
Mike wins
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Wasn't a fan of the flip undead used... Just didn't like the whole robin givens cuz of the wording
MW came clean and simple but effective and it connected V/MW
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V/ Mike, pretty good I thought...wording could have been stronger/harsher - 'walk in the park' was good as a set up but 'slide' was overdoing it and made it a little corny... still pretty good bar tho
Undead if you need to explain a a bar you should incorporate it into the bar itself... otherwise ppl read the bar like huh? then read the expo and by then it's too late to have any impact and explaining bars seems lame. Was an OK concept but a bit tricky to make the wording work
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