K Huntsman vs ribbit [K Huntsman WINS]

K Huntsman · 07-22-2014, 02:50 PM

10 lines
Due by midnight
@ribbit

K Huntsman · 07-22-2014, 02:55 PM

Check

ribbit · 07-22-2014, 02:59 PM

In this

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=3...d=1#post368122
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=368153#post368153

ribbit · 07-22-2014, 03:40 PM

U getting bruised bitch ur fam useless forget ya mom and pops shit
the only solution is to put all ur loved ones in a coffin
mite key this battle but ribbit live right next to da locksmith
u crashing k but rib got u homeless shootin airballs picking up dog shit
tough love k but why thug when u get no love..plus
u cant c rib through his smoke bombs
and guess wat? noone wants u to get there vote
like blacks who are running for office
u can disguise urself but this forun expects adjustments
so forget ya customs u got blue balls rap artists call k numb nuts

K Huntsman · 07-22-2014, 03:46 PM

I'll hit the blunt...rip this slut apart with no care
If you catch rib rollin up, he'll be half dead in a fuckin wheel chair
I don't usually battle newbs...bitch hit ya knees cos ya blessed
A dope verse from you ?...we got better chance of a WNBA dunk contest
I'll choke you out sheik style so keep 5-0 on call
Cos while I'm living life on edge, this faggot just has his posters on the wall
You ain't deadly with shit...homie go rethink ya thesis
I could revolutionize butchery the way I chop bits to pieces
Thinkin about gettin a hot start on the board ?..nah kid
I'm like a vegan the way we'll never get a chance to see a prime rib

Shakin the rust... Dropping links later

07-23-2014, 12:04 PM

@ribbit - please work on your structure as well as end rhymes, bro. I mean, you hardly rhymed anything. Not sure what type of accent you have, but...

Pop shit/Coffin - Do not rhyme
Locksmith/Dog shit - The smith/shit's a near rhyme but comes off awkward

Quote:

tough love k but why thug when u get no love..plus
u cant c rib through his smoke bombs
and guess wat? noone wants u to get there vote
like blacks who are running for office

Not sure what ^ is, tbh. Is it 2 bars/4lines or 1 bar/2lines in a weird stretched format?

And your closer really didn't make much sense to me, tbr. With that being said, I'm not trying to come off as a dick but this verses was pretty terrible, IMO. Work on structuring your bars/lines in a better format because it caused issues while reading, from a readers perspective. I had a hard time trying to follow a flow not to mention, your end rhymes were off as well so I couldn't find any type of flow. Concepts were weak/not effective, just an overall pretty bad verse.

vs

Hunts had an OK'ish verse. Nothing really WOW'd me but you had a few attempts. I liked the concepts on your name flip attempts but feel the executions could have been worded in more of a harsher manner.

Quote:

You ain't deadly with shit...homie go rethink ya thesis
I could revolutionize butchery the way I chop bits to pieces
Thinkin about gettin a hot start on the board ?..nah kid
I'm like a vegan the way we'll never get a chance to see a prime rib

IMO, were your best bars/PUNS. The rest was blahhh'ish to me. I see you have the basics down just work on structuring your punches with fresher and more effective concepts with harsh executions and you'll be straight, bro...

Overall: IMO, this battle was pretty one sided as ribbit had nothing vs the 2 quotes I got from HUNTS which were his best bars out of the entire verse. So with that being said...

v/K Huntsman

K Huntsman · 07-23-2014, 08:40 PM

Voted on:

Swerve vs Gamble
Jilti vs Doug funny

Dope girl · 07-23-2014, 10:12 PM

Both of you need more work, Should have came with better & stronger bars
Vote-KH

Paradigm · 07-23-2014, 10:41 PM

Silver vote doesn't count. Not explained.

ribbit · 07-24-2014, 03:56 AM

So its still 1-0 in ur favour k

Blanco Bishop · 07-25-2014, 09:23 AM

Rib..your bars are good for audio. But u need a grasp of similes n metaphors. Youll get better bro.

Khunt u had the butchery line. That pretty much won it for u.

V k hunt

KnowP · 07-28-2014, 11:45 AM

nothin hard.

vs

You ain't deadly with shit...homie go rethink ya thesis
I could revolutionize butchery the way I chop bits to pieces
Thinkin about gettin a hot start on the board ?..nah kid
I'm like a vegan the way we'll never get a chance to see a prime rib

Hunt got this easy with better flips and the bits n pieces bar which was a good nameplay. Ribbit needs to work on rhyming his punches and being more creative with fresher concepts and personals. keep it up tho.

v. hunts[/B]

Paradigm · 07-29-2014, 04:28 AM

K Huntsman wins 3-0.

K Huntsman: (0) +5W+2Links=7pts
ribbit: (0) -3L+2Links=0pts

07-22-2014, 02:50 PM	#1
K Huntsman Siberian Rocky Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 63 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 0	K Huntsman vs ribbit [K Huntsman WINS] 10 lines Due by midnight @ribbit

07-22-2014, 02:59 PM	#3
ribbit The deputy of nc Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: The Rodent Kingdom Posts: 514 Battle Record: 1-10 Rep Power: 7784053	In this http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=3...d=1#post368122 http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=368153#post368153 Last edited by ribbit; 07-23-2014 at 05:43 AM.

07-22-2014, 03:40 PM	#4
ribbit The deputy of nc Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: The Rodent Kingdom Posts: 514 Battle Record: 1-10 Rep Power: 7784053	U getting bruised bitch ur fam useless forget ya mom and pops shit the only solution is to put all ur loved ones in a coffin mite key this battle but ribbit live right next to da locksmith u crashing k but rib got u homeless shootin airballs picking up dog shit tough love k but why thug when u get no love..plus u cant c rib through his smoke bombs and guess wat? noone wants u to get there vote like blacks who are running for office u can disguise urself but this forun expects adjustments so forget ya customs u got blue balls rap artists call k numb nuts Last edited by ribbit; 07-23-2014 at 05:55 AM.

07-22-2014, 02:55 PM	#2
K Huntsman Siberian Rocky Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 63 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 0	Check

07-22-2014, 03:46 PM	#5
K Huntsman Siberian Rocky Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 63 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 0	I'll hit the blunt...rip this slut apart with no care If you catch rib rollin up, he'll be half dead in a fuckin wheel chair I don't usually battle newbs...bitch hit ya knees cos ya blessed A dope verse from you ?...we got better chance of a WNBA dunk contest I'll choke you out sheik style so keep 5-0 on call Cos while I'm living life on edge, this faggot just has his posters on the wall You ain't deadly with shit...homie go rethink ya thesis I could revolutionize butchery the way I chop bits to pieces Thinkin about gettin a hot start on the board ?..nah kid I'm like a vegan the way we'll never get a chance to see a prime rib Shakin the rust... Dropping links later

07-23-2014, 08:40 PM	#7
K Huntsman Siberian Rocky Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 63 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 0	Voted on: Swerve vs Gamble Jilti vs Doug funny

07-23-2014, 10:12 PM	#8
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	Both of you need more work, Should have came with better & stronger bars Vote-KH

07-23-2014, 10:41 PM	#9
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033512	Silver vote doesn't count. Not explained.

07-24-2014, 03:56 AM	#10
ribbit The deputy of nc Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: The Rodent Kingdom Posts: 514 Battle Record: 1-10 Rep Power: 7784053	So its still 1-0 in ur favour k

07-25-2014, 09:23 AM	#11
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150485	Rib..your bars are good for audio. But u need a grasp of similes n metaphors. Youll get better bro. Khunt u had the butchery line. That pretty much won it for u. V k hunt

07-28-2014, 11:45 AM	#12
KnowP Nasty Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 222 Battle Record: 6-3 Champed - BA Cypher Rep Power: 3463488	nothin hard. vs You ain't deadly with shit...homie go rethink ya thesis I could revolutionize butchery the way I chop bits to pieces Thinkin about gettin a hot start on the board ?..nah kid I'm like a vegan the way we'll never get a chance to see a prime rib Hunt got this easy with better flips and the bits n pieces bar which was a good nameplay. Ribbit needs to work on rhyming his punches and being more creative with fresher concepts and personals. keep it up tho. v. hunts[/B]

07-29-2014, 04:28 AM	#13
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033512	K Huntsman wins 3-0. K Huntsman: (0) +5W+2Links=7pts ribbit: (0) -3L+2Links=0pts