rough written audio

Bodey · 07-17-2014, 05:45 PM

https://soundcloud.com/badiali/chron...n-to-freestyle

wrote this to no beat so thats why some parts dont flow so well but it's not bad lyrically. also freestyle for a min afterward. lemme knowwww

StarFaggot · 07-17-2014, 05:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Badi Alii

https://soundcloud.com/badiali/chron...n-to-freestyle

wrote this to no beat so thats why some parts dont flow so well but it's not bad lyrically. also freestyle for a min afterward. lemme knowwww

Ima let you know right now I won't listen unless it's your best quality. My time isn't to be wasted and I'm sure you're the same way which leads me to this: get at me in the pms id love to have great convo. Make today yours.

Bodey · 07-17-2014, 05:52 PM

it wont be my best quality. i dont have a mic, i have a voice memo on iphone. but i can promise you it's better than anything i've posted here before. at least more emotion and lyrical ability in my opinion. but thank you

StarFaggot · 07-17-2014, 05:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Badi Alii

it wont be my best quality. i dont have a mic, i have a voice memo on iphone. but i can promise you it's better than anything i've posted here before. at least more emotion and lyrical ability in my opinion. but thank you

Okay tell you what. This is your audition for me. I'll take a listen.

big baby · 07-17-2014, 05:57 PM

hey @Aero dis how it done fuckin omega

hey badi u so cutezio. i love da audio want 2 chat about it OVER HOT COFFEE AND protein gummy bears. also y dey call u bodey is it cause u got DA BODEY OF A GODDESS ??????

also did it hurt?

bodey: hurt ?

HURT WHEN MY LOVE HIT YOU AT FIRST SIGHT!!!

bodey: bb *faints*

i'm gonna pm you and make today ours

StarFaggot · 07-17-2014, 06:00 PM

Ok @bad alli I listened and my first instinct was to laugh, then I felt sadness then I thought you know what? She has heart, she has a message and she's got ability.

That beat that comes in after ur rap is hard.

Wise Wiggles · 07-17-2014, 06:00 PM

I just got a little hard off that

StarFaggot · 07-17-2014, 06:04 PM

Bad alli you're dope real talk.

2nd listen

Bodey · 07-17-2014, 06:06 PM

ha whether you're taking it seriously or not, i always appreciate the listen. i got a lot to add to it, it's just not on paper yet in full bars, only concepts.

Half Wit It · 07-17-2014, 06:06 PM

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Originally Posted by DexLabb

what the fuck is this web site?

Will listen and edit with feed when I get home , tho

Badweather · 07-17-2014, 07:19 PM

Time to buy a mic. It sounds thin.

Bodey · 07-21-2014, 08:07 PM

Thanks for listening everyone. Ill have something more complete coming soon

Half Wit It · 07-21-2014, 08:23 PM

Maybe I will get sober..

NAH.

Digging your lyrics, though.
If you translated that cypher-sound into complete tracks you'd be limitless.

Kin · 07-22-2014, 07:34 AM

Whole Basket Case scheme was pretty impressive...even tho' thiz is a "rough" my one critique for you when you re-do it is watch the over-pronouncing of certain words...that stuck out to me and made a couple of the words you said slower feel a lil' awkard in my opinion,,

thats minor tho'...everything else is dope..If your lookin' for a beat to put this ova hit me up I got plenty I've made in the archives...also collab...hit me up

07-17-2014, 06:00 PM	#6
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,110 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	Ok @bad alli I listened and my first instinct was to laugh, then I felt sadness then I thought you know what? She has heart, she has a message and she's got ability. That beat that comes in after ur rap is hard. __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

07-17-2014, 06:00 PM	#7
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,507 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788019	I just got a little hard off that __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

07-17-2014, 06:04 PM	#8
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,110 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	Bad alli you're dope real talk. 2nd listen __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

07-17-2014, 07:19 PM	#11
Badweather Chillin' like FUCK!!! Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,855 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	Time to buy a mic. It sounds thin. __________________ Chill Phil My rep hand is NOT WAY strong anymore.

07-21-2014, 08:23 PM	#13
Half Wit It Nalyubuites Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 449 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 4465332	Maybe I will get sober.. NAH. Digging your lyrics, though. If you translated that cypher-sound into complete tracks you'd be limitless. __________________

07-22-2014, 07:34 AM	#14
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662198	Whole Basket Case scheme was pretty impressive...even tho' thiz is a "rough" my one critique for you when you re-do it is watch the over-pronouncing of certain words...that stuck out to me and made a couple of the words you said slower feel a lil' awkard in my opinion,, thats minor tho'...everything else is dope..If your lookin' for a beat to put this ova hit me up I got plenty I've made in the archives...also collab...hit me up