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07-13-2014, 01:17 PM
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hello, somebody, hey, I once held a shotgun
I don’t even know you. but we can if you want hun you don’t even gotta think. heck, we could probably kiss the kiss wouldn’t mean nothing, but it means I’ve got your attention even for a minute, i’m knuckle deep grabbing your denim to the point it feels so practiced. its venom most don’t appreciate being alone and its like now i’m attached to anybody who listens this is over the counter psychiatry, prescription written on journal paper cigar puffs blanket views to the summer lake, sinatra on the record player dusk finger fucks the horizon, hair drapes your gentle face move it to the side, gentle breeze whispers i love you with no trace of my scent, the callous that breaks every silhouette i drew i’m just trying to make you remember this, forever. i’m trying to plant my root stay |
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07-13-2014, 02:59 PM
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not sure if mourning for a relationship you lost/ruined, or a person who died from you raping/torturing?
not sure if the prescription these writtens are for is an antidepressant, or anti psychotic. dad?
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07-14-2014, 03:17 PM
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07-14-2014, 03:37 PM
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this is over the counter psychiatry, prescription written on journal paper cigar puffs blanket views to the summer lake, sinatra on the record player seems like your lines stretch a lil' too long in between rhymes...but if thats juz ya style I respect that...def. a original style here HoLLa |
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07-14-2014, 11:01 PM
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I agree with kin, but...
"most don’t appreciate being alone and its like now i’m attached to anybody who listens" ... is sicker.
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09-08-2014, 08:37 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
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Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
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- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
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- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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09-08-2014, 11:51 PM
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I dig it.
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09-09-2014, 09:29 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2013
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Melancholy bliss
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