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07-07-2014, 11:19 AM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
Join Date: Jun 2014
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One More Line (audio)
https://soundcloud.com/its-kin/one-m...uced-by-learic
beat made by Learic verse 1- Learic verse 2- Kin verse 3- Learic/Kin Hook- Learic/Kin |
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07-07-2014, 12:25 PM
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song genius
Join Date: Sep 2013
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dont take this the wrong way but you rhyme too much man. to the point where its like ur not even sayin nothin ur just rhyming. i really like this beat compare to last one cause it had the whole pumped up kicks type of vibe to it a bit. i think you could do yourself a favour by focusing on saying shit that people will remember easier...dont take that as hate tho man alright?
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07-07-2014, 12:46 PM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
Join Date: Jun 2014
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all good...what U mean by rhyme too much??? cuz' we both stickin' to the theme of the track...maybe you mean rhyme schemes too close together??? I dunno
But either way I appreciate you checkin' this Yessiiiiir |
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