fuck all those wack titles you faggòts think of

Wise Wiggles · 06-20-2013, 10:13 AM

Do you pill?..or sniff. Give that milf the dick & kill the rich
Yeah? Cool.. It's payday but life's STILL a bitch
We broke & ill equipped, so what's the price of this land?
Not like of a man, but right where you stand
Ohhhh, you seen my best, huh? I write it in sand
Jesus-phlegm, treat this pen like a spike in the hand
That's worse than I thought. Last words from the cross
I'm sick of this shit, about to murder the boss
Killing em softly... Are you sure of the cost?
Just a brick in the wall trying to search for a slot
It's like hey look cupcake,
I give zero fucks about your Facebook update
You didn't win no sweepstakes & there ain't no rebate
Pea-brain. Keep the weed blazed to cremate ya dream state
Place your yums where the stripper rakes her ones
My dick orbits around her mouth til it scrape the gums
Shave the tongue down to some type of play-doh sponge
Okay, you're dumb! Quit playing captain save-a-cunt
Trying to raise her sons, lazy bum
Raise a razor to ya razor bumps & take the plunge
Remember me... The monster to ya soul?
I'm on my new shit, though. Ain't karma beautiful?
The pen is stronger. Respect's no longer mutual
I flow speed, so proceed slowly if you aren't used'ta dope
Start'ta jew ya folks, pawning jewlery drawers for pharmaceuticals
This type of raw's unusual, & I chase relentless
Brain's defective. Put an ad out for a rape apprentice
Train with weapons more than Raid: Redemption
Such a great invention, the blade's my best friend
It's more than just teething. The storage is leaking
So follow my trail as I drag this corpse to the ceiling
Absinthe-yager assassinator w/Catherine-Zeta
You can have this labor, trunk full of plastic layers
Trying to catch a kiss from cat woman but that's a taser
Ask a neighbor, cuz there's nothing sweet here
Cry blood & bleed tears. Time sucks so drink beer
4th birthday at the bar yo... cuz mine was on leap year

Void · 06-20-2013, 12:58 PM

Dope.

CopyPat · 06-20-2013, 01:47 PM

haha so sick. i been waiting for a new drop from u. this one was worth the wait. your so straight to the point in ur pieces. no bullshit, just realness. the cocky asshole vibe really works for you haha.

It's like hey look cupcake,
I give zero fucks about your Facebook update

Okay, you're dumb! Quit playing captain save-a-cunt
Trying to raise her sons, lazy bum
Raise a razor to ya razor bumps & take the plunge

I'm on my new shit, though. Ain't karma beautiful?
The pen is stronger. Respect's no longer mutual

and then raid redemption catherine zeta shit too

Awesome.

Oh and great title

dead man · 06-20-2013, 06:03 PM

Ohhhh, you seen my best, huh? I write it in sand
Jesus-phlegm, treat this pen like a spike in the hand

It's like hey look cupcake,
I give zero fucks about your Facebook update

Start'ta jew ya folks, pawning jewlery drawers for pharmaceuticals

Absinthe-yager assassinator w/Catherine-Zeta

awesome..

i think you're beginning to hit a new stride with the verses ive seen you writing recently. it's like you're rediscovering the fun of it.

keep going mah niggar

hit me for a collaborashin

Geno · 06-20-2013, 10:54 PM

Bout time my g

Wise getting back on his raw shit. Had some slick lines in there. Definitely a dope multi usage going on. Always love some fresh shit from you man. Good to see you dropping again homie. Need to get a collab going

Vulgar · 06-21-2013, 08:11 PM

This type of raw's unusual, & I chase relentless
Brain's defective. Put an ad out for a rape apprentice
Train with weapons more than Raid: Redemption
Such a great invention, the blade's my best friend
It's more than just teething. The storage is leaking
So follow my trail as I drag this corpse to the ceiling
Absinthe-yager assassinator w/Catherine-Zeta
You can have this labor, trunk full of plastic layers
^bonkers.

The rest was chill but the above section was niiice.

Eŋg · 06-22-2013, 11:28 PM

Force-feeding the reader rhythms. It can come off pretty damn nicely in segments, and the other times when it's less inspired, the flow is still tangible, so it ticks along. I fucked with that nod to Raid: Redemption, that's a film I'm a fan of.

You rhyme a lot, and go where you like with the content. Overall i'd say it was cool, just not a fan of your style.

06-20-2013, 10:13 AM	#1
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	fuck all those wack titles you faggòts think of Do you pill?..or sniff. Give that milf the dick & kill the rich Yeah? Cool.. It's payday but life's STILL a bitch We broke & ill equipped, so what's the price of this land? Not like of a man, but right where you stand Ohhhh, you seen my best, huh? I write it in sand Jesus-phlegm, treat this pen like a spike in the hand That's worse than I thought. Last words from the cross I'm sick of this shit, about to murder the boss Killing em softly... Are you sure of the cost? Just a brick in the wall trying to search for a slot It's like hey look cupcake, I give zero fucks about your Facebook update You didn't win no sweepstakes & there ain't no rebate Pea-brain. Keep the weed blazed to cremate ya dream state Place your yums where the stripper rakes her ones My dick orbits around her mouth til it scrape the gums Shave the tongue down to some type of play-doh sponge Okay, you're dumb! Quit playing captain save-a-cunt Trying to raise her sons, lazy bum Raise a razor to ya razor bumps & take the plunge Remember me... The monster to ya soul? I'm on my new shit, though. Ain't karma beautiful? The pen is stronger. Respect's no longer mutual I flow speed, so proceed slowly if you aren't used'ta dope Start'ta jew ya folks, pawning jewlery drawers for pharmaceuticals This type of raw's unusual, & I chase relentless Brain's defective. Put an ad out for a rape apprentice Train with weapons more than Raid: Redemption Such a great invention, the blade's my best friend It's more than just teething. The storage is leaking So follow my trail as I drag this corpse to the ceiling Absinthe-yager assassinator w/Catherine-Zeta You can have this labor, trunk full of plastic layers Trying to catch a kiss from cat woman but that's a taser Ask a neighbor, cuz there's nothing sweet here Cry blood & bleed tears. Time sucks so drink beer 4th birthday at the bar yo... cuz mine was on leap year __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

06-20-2013, 06:03 PM	#4
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	Ohhhh, you seen my best, huh? I write it in sand Jesus-phlegm, treat this pen like a spike in the hand It's like hey look cupcake, I give zero fucks about your Facebook update Start'ta jew ya folks, pawning jewlery drawers for pharmaceuticals Absinthe-yager assassinator w/Catherine-Zeta awesome.. i think you're beginning to hit a new stride with the verses ive seen you writing recently. it's like you're rediscovering the fun of it. keep going mah niggar hit me for a collaborashin __________________ Zack Wicks for president

06-20-2013, 10:54 PM	#5
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Bout time my g Wise getting back on his raw shit. Had some slick lines in there. Definitely a dope multi usage going on. Always love some fresh shit from you man. Good to see you dropping again homie. Need to get a collab going __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

06-22-2013, 11:28 PM	#7
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	Force-feeding the reader rhythms. It can come off pretty damn nicely in segments, and the other times when it's less inspired, the flow is still tangible, so it ticks along. I fucked with that nod to Raid: Redemption, that's a film I'm a fan of. You rhyme a lot, and go where you like with the content. Overall i'd say it was cool, just not a fan of your style. Last edited by Eŋg; 08-14-2013 at 02:00 PM.

06-20-2013, 12:58 PM	#2
Void Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 221 Rep Power: 0	Dope.

06-20-2013, 01:47 PM	#3
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	haha so sick. i been waiting for a new drop from u. this one was worth the wait. your so straight to the point in ur pieces. no bullshit, just realness. the cocky asshole vibe really works for you haha. It's like hey look cupcake, I give zero fucks about your Facebook update Okay, you're dumb! Quit playing captain save-a-cunt Trying to raise her sons, lazy bum Raise a razor to ya razor bumps & take the plunge I'm on my new shit, though. Ain't karma beautiful? The pen is stronger. Respect's no longer mutual and then raid redemption catherine zeta shit too Awesome. Oh and great title

06-21-2013, 08:11 PM	#6
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	This type of raw's unusual, & I chase relentless Brain's defective. Put an ad out for a rape apprentice Train with weapons more than Raid: Redemption Such a great invention, the blade's my best friend It's more than just teething. The storage is leaking So follow my trail as I drag this corpse to the ceiling Absinthe-yager assassinator w/Catherine-Zeta You can have this labor, trunk full of plastic layers ^bonkers. The rest was chill but the above section was niiice.