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Mitch · 06-17-2014, 02:24 AM

Candy is a baby's vice.
Cancer is a state of mind.
Happiness will take its time.
Sadness will take its toll,
so wait in line. Pay your fine.
Pay your way to fine.
Wave your right to waver rights.
Pave your pain a drive and race the sky.

I got old school vibes,
mixed with new school styles,
offset by middle school education.
I'm still the hottest drop out since Lucifer/Satan.
Kitchen appliances mock my mom as she fixes my dinners.
Band-aids over radiated inners'.
Dinner isn't warm forever.
Never has a sinner snored through abhorrent weather.

Zen · 06-17-2014, 02:27 AM

I really liked the first part especially the last few lines of the first half. You have great wording. Cool stuff.

Dope girl · 06-17-2014, 06:37 PM

this was pretty good.

06-17-2014, 02:24 AM	#1
Mitch Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Location: Canada Posts: 160 Rep Power: 2208351	Random 7 Candy is a baby's vice. Cancer is a state of mind. Happiness will take its time. Sadness will take its toll, so wait in line. Pay your fine. Pay your way to fine. Wave your right to waver rights. Pave your pain a drive and race the sky. I got old school vibes, mixed with new school styles, offset by middle school education. I'm still the hottest drop out since Lucifer/Satan. Kitchen appliances mock my mom as she fixes my dinners. Band-aids over radiated inners'. Dinner isn't warm forever. Never has a sinner snored through abhorrent weather. __________________ Soundcloud.com/TheDirtySerpent

06-17-2014, 02:27 AM	#2
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	I really liked the first part especially the last few lines of the first half. You have great wording. Cool stuff.

06-17-2014, 06:37 PM	#3
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,789 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	this was pretty good.