Punch line gun rhyme festival

Breh321 · 05-12-2013, 06:08 PM

ghandi how i let all of these desis go
ali how i wreck body parts with all these blows
my gun marley how its smokin with a heavenly glow
that burn everyone in your circle like That 70s Show

Talking bout they jump like they all fierce
Solid with this metal, better start to park when I put it into gear
Loudest dudes in the room got the smallest hearts to be feared
Cuz these so called thugs be fakin with the pump.. Playa you Paul pierce

But don't get it twisted like a dreadlock bout how I let that it ring and get that thing wet
I kill it it's a headshot I let that thing sing, moving back and forth like a swing set

But multis are what's seeming to be teeming I'm beaming
Offer my condolence to opponents that I leave dreaming
Consider it a blessing if you Restin leave the the rest of the section bleeding..leaking
I am beasting.. beating these underachieving
Rappers trying to move up in stature in my whey (no protein)
(No codeine) but I'm leaving these people leaning

God status. Light work.

Boredom · 05-12-2013, 06:17 PM

heavy work, pawn status. read around a bit and get a better feel for how shit should be linked up multi wise, no inners.. poor vocab.

Breh321 · 05-13-2013, 07:24 PM

lol not sure if you got where i was coming from, but like the title says its al gun rhymes and punchlines. The object wasnt to create some deep or even techincal piece with multis, inners, high vocab, etc. Its just a piece where the setups have no thought in them, and the punches are supposed to be good.

- burn everyone in they the circle like That 70s Show
- you fakin with the pump..playa you paul pierce
- thing move back and forth like a swing set

......do you get what i mean?

now if these punches are played out then pls let me know, but setups are not supposed to be great

05-12-2013, 06:08 PM	#1
Breh321 Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 37	Punch line gun rhyme festival ghandi how i let all of these desis go ali how i wreck body parts with all these blows my gun marley how its smokin with a heavenly glow that burn everyone in your circle like That 70s Show Talking bout they jump like they all fierce Solid with this metal, better start to park when I put it into gear Loudest dudes in the room got the smallest hearts to be feared Cuz these so called thugs be fakin with the pump.. Playa you Paul pierce But don't get it twisted like a dreadlock bout how I let that it ring and get that thing wet I kill it it's a headshot I let that thing sing, moving back and forth like a swing set But multis are what's seeming to be teeming I'm beaming Offer my condolence to opponents that I leave dreaming Consider it a blessing if you Restin leave the the rest of the section bleeding..leaking I am beasting.. beating these underachieving Rappers trying to move up in stature in my whey (no protein) (No codeine) but I'm leaving these people leaning God status. Light work. __________________ im doin something these wack battle cats ain't really used to, see this is rappin Last edited by Breh321; 05-12-2013 at 06:11 PM.

05-13-2013, 07:24 PM	#3
Breh321 Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 37	lol not sure if you got where i was coming from, but like the title says its al gun rhymes and punchlines. The object wasnt to create some deep or even techincal piece with multis, inners, high vocab, etc. Its just a piece where the setups have no thought in them, and the punches are supposed to be good. - burn everyone in they the circle like That 70s Show - you fakin with the pump..playa you paul pierce - thing move back and forth like a swing set ......do you get what i mean? now if these punches are played out then pls let me know, but setups are not supposed to be great __________________ im doin something these wack battle cats ain't really used to, see this is rappin

05-12-2013, 06:17 PM	#2
Boredom Been On One Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 1,617 Battle Record: 26-28 Champed - Newbie Tournament IV Rep Power: 415110	heavy work, pawn status. read around a bit and get a better feel for how shit should be linked up multi wise, no inners.. poor vocab.