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Old 04-06-2014, 09:40 AM   #1
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Yo the stomach's empty' it echoes
Decimals beneath leverage, I'll do better sis, never quit
I'm hear, but over there, hold my stare
my sitting stance is a soldier's chair
Mold repair, fold a square, bold but bare
I was told to air. I love myself and cry
Hung myself on why's. It's really that depressing
I can't find love. Im just a little boy.turned around and teary eyed.
Seeking for himself what the mirror denied
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Here's the line. It's all just dust. Quick ups.
You know this sucks but it sucks you in
You're a human. So why not
Get a little wetness on that dry spot?
I cry lots. The eyes sop, mine are green
I melt down stairs. Turn slime in dreams
This a love search, but I can't find a thing
Everybody's better, is what I'm inclined to think
I'm what's bad for you. Sorry, but I'm the drink
Why am I here ? Ppl can't realize, the real eyes
They're deep in a shallow world without a girl
Why./.I'm fucking serious with is
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Old 04-09-2014, 12:09 PM   #2
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Was this keyed? Felt like it was, but I dug it...well obviously as I'm bringin' it back to the first page lol.Even though it read as a rough draft there was a lot I liked...more emotion then I'm used to seein' from you which was cool, refreshin' to say the least.

my sitting stance is a soldier's chair
Mold repair, fold a square, bold but bare
I was told to air. I love myself and cry
Hung myself on why's. It's really that depressing
I can't find love. Im just a little boy.turned around and teary eyed.
Seeking for himself what the mirror denied
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Here's the line. It's all just dust. Quick ups.
You know this sucks but it sucks you in

^^Thought that was nice bro.

Stay uppity.
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