bleak vs. Vinny BLEAK WINS

[bleak]

10 lines

2 days should do.

[Vinny]

you get more mentions! admins better have the votes checked
if this takes a Turn for the worst, im just stating go ahead, post next
its in ur Jeans! the kid just a closet faggit that urge to try dick
you aint in my area or my ZIP!
the way he always staring at the Fly, youd think he had dreams of being a pilot
are those tits or just an odd swell to the chest
in the shoes of the best? you couldnt, the sneakers dont go well w/ your dress
your girl a real whore w/ the dick, her face just hoardin the shit
if you act tough on the net! il leave you layin on the Keys, like vacations to Floridas Tip
when it comes to battling i do everything legit & by the book you should try it
this kid sucked so bad i told him that, he offered cash & tried to buy it


^quick & @ work will get links

[bleak]

Your battles are a travesty. I see like 8 at a time, taking blows at Kwality.
How do you expect to live up to your name? obv you're NEVER getting over Quantity.
Ya moms and girl? they love me. Called me up because I'm dickin em right.
Got em both on the floor, and I'm changin faces like what Knuck did to the site.
Yea I'm hated, debated. I got these riders, but I'll STILL kill this virgin.
See I had a Crusade against me, then they decided to send the Children's version.
Bro, your name is ironic. This dude'll get bagged like every competitor.
proved when the Kwality of battles dropped severely when this fag decided to register.
You thought the marathon was bad? I'll take ya bitch in the ruckus.
Flags are at half mast for Boston... ya girl got mine at full attention for sucking.

10 fin.

links'll be up by tonight.

[Vinny]

uppin.

[Vinny]

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=5282
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=5575

[Sharp]

your girl a real whore w/ the dick, her face just hoardin the shit
if you act tough on the net! il leave you layin on the Keys, like vacations to Floridas Tip
when it comes to battling i do everything legit & by the book you should try it
this kid sucked so bad i told him that, he offered cash & tried to buy it

v


Your battles are a travesty. I see like 8 at a time, taking blows at Kwality.
How do you expect to live up to your name? obv you're NEVER getting over Quantity.
Ya moms and girl? they love me. Called me up because I'm dickin em right.
Got em both on the floor, and I'm changin faces like what Knuck did to the site.

Childrens crusade was almost


I tend to go for concepts and wording over rhymes and flow, so bleaks opener was lotb for me. It technically rhymes one syllable, yeah, but its kind of deceptive. Generally found bleak's concepts stronger while Vinny seemed a little corny to me, guess its more preference and I found bleak's personal gave him a slight edge

V/bleak

[Chyeahhh!!!]

I've got bleak edging this with a few better hits. There weren't really alot of misses but there were some between both, just a little neck in neck. Both nameplays were on point, I thought Bleaks opener was a little better than Vinnys. Bleaks closer was better than Vinny's but could have been worded better (pot calling the kettle I know lol). Vinny I saw what you did with the jean scheme and it was slick

vote Bleak

[GKillaZ]

Vinny:
your girl a real whore w/ the dick, her face just hoardin the shit
if you act tough on the net! il leave you layin on the Keys, like vacations to Floridas Tip
when it comes to battling i do everything legit & by the book you should try it
this kid sucked so bad i told him that, he offered cash & tried to buy it

vs.
bleak:
Your battles are a travesty. I see like 8 at a time, taking blows at Kwality.
How do you expect to live up to your name? obv you're NEVER getting over Quantity.
You thought the marathon was bad? I'll take ya bitch in the ruckus.
Flags are at half mast for Boston... ya girl got mine at full attention for sucking.

overall:
I give my vote to bleak. his verse was just a little bit better. Vinny had nice rhymes and flow, but now that many hard hits at the start. Where I feel bleak have a hard opener and closer, and thats why I gave the slight edge to hit. Vote - bleak

[Defiant]

3-0 BLEAK UPPIN

[ill nik-A]

this is basically a bad worded florida keys line
vs
bleak's quantity line and I think bleak's line was the better of the two

vote bleak