I'm high =D

Mc Hype · 03-02-2014, 09:34 PM

My hoe is a bitch, always asking "why won't you progress?!"
All you do is smoke weed and meth It's controlling your head!
You don't own me, so EHHH =P, I'm leaving you lonely in bed!
Go find another bitch that'll care...but you won't! there's no next!"
SO I smacked her...put both my knees on her soapy smooth neck...
Told her you can leave but I'm keeping your throat and your head..
She said, "OSCAR THIS IS SICK!" I said no bitch it's death =D.
THE ONLY THING YOU WERE GOOD FOR WAS SUCKING MY DICK!
That didn't rhyme..so sue me...I'll open your chest...
With napoleons set, of old and moldy swords he possessed..
Oh and yes, Invite him to help me cut the holes in your breasts.
You just got mutilated...by a gay ghost speaking french =D
I'm smashing your bones into mesh, this is gross? Eat some flesh!
It's glowing! It's red! We don't need to roast it, INGEST!
I'll take a bite outta your heart while I'm groping your ex
EVEN the pope's screaming yes!....telling me "OH PLEASE IM NEXT!"
These are the results, of when a human Goes and forgets
That it's illegal for your mind to be this openly vexed...
I'm addicted to Oxycodone, and X, opium, sex...
High...with speeding tickets on this fucking road to success

Exoduzt · 03-03-2014, 10:52 AM

very basic concept wise with the horrocore type deal. Some of this was comical to me for some reason. You did manage to have a fluid flow throughout for the most part. I would have liked to see a bit more substance to this piece. maybe throw your own original twist to it instead of the basic. but none the less it was a decent drop

Hush · 03-03-2014, 11:44 AM

Wack to me

03-02-2014, 09:34 PM	#1
Mc Hype Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 27 Rep Power: 37	I'm high =D My hoe is a bitch, always asking "why won't you progress?!" All you do is smoke weed and meth It's controlling your head! You don't own me, so EHHH =P, I'm leaving you lonely in bed! Go find another bitch that'll care...but you won't! there's no next!" SO I smacked her...put both my knees on her soapy smooth neck... Told her you can leave but I'm keeping your throat and your head.. She said, "OSCAR THIS IS SICK!" I said no bitch it's death =D. THE ONLY THING YOU WERE GOOD FOR WAS SUCKING MY DICK! That didn't rhyme..so sue me...I'll open your chest... With napoleons set, of old and moldy swords he possessed.. Oh and yes, Invite him to help me cut the holes in your breasts. You just got mutilated...by a gay ghost speaking french =D I'm smashing your bones into mesh, this is gross? Eat some flesh! It's glowing! It's red! We don't need to roast it, INGEST! I'll take a bite outta your heart while I'm groping your ex EVEN the pope's screaming yes!....telling me "OH PLEASE IM NEXT!" These are the results, of when a human Goes and forgets That it's illegal for your mind to be this openly vexed... I'm addicted to Oxycodone, and X, opium, sex... High...with speeding tickets on this fucking road to success Last edited by Mc Hype; 03-02-2014 at 09:43 PM.

03-03-2014, 10:52 AM	#2
Exoduzt Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 39 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 38	very basic concept wise with the horrocore type deal. Some of this was comical to me for some reason. You did manage to have a fluid flow throughout for the most part. I would have liked to see a bit more substance to this piece. maybe throw your own original twist to it instead of the basic. but none the less it was a decent drop __________________

03-03-2014, 11:44 AM	#3
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	Wack to me __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk