Shadow Boxing rnd1 Witty vs cntrlf4 - WITTY WINS

[Hush]

Witty



My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track
Stop the played rhymes or I'll cop some jail time for hate crimes, u lazy disgrace
As I lay him to waste, you'll see his first original lines come from a blade to his face
The way ur living is bummy, I bet it feels like prison, ur getting played and shit isn't funny
His first time on a plane, he got excited at a random check cuz he thot they were givin him money
This winter's cold, but the chrome I lift and point at your swollen lips is colder
Ur hoe's a bitch, she's like chyeahhh, some1 needs to tell her get off the polar shift is over
Ur poor as fuck, you rob for pennies, to get paid you just raise eagles
So what little cash he actually gets is tainted....it taint his and it taint legal
This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key
Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke


cntrl

Was homeless when he as 17...made a thread one day saying he was the only one logged in

Fox aka witness


I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise
I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news
Sorry about ur childhood but hey life isn't fair
Cuz at 17, I was playing True Crime: Streets of L.A. and you was prolly out living there
Nobody likes you and you really need a life dude
Cuz you don't just spend time irl alone, you do it on the site too
Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless
Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction
You've neva scored dweeb, stop actin like you givin whores d
You probably only named urself witness, Cuz ur known for telling stories
All ya rape threats is weird n makes us think ur screwed wit
You created "That Awkward Moment" wayyyy before that new flick

[Ghost1]

[QUOTE=Hush;279609]Witty



My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track

This is slick

Stop the played rhymes or I'll cop some jail time for hate crimes, u lazy disgrace
As I lay him to waste, you'll see his first original lines come from a blade to his face

Eh

The way ur living is bummy, I bet it feels like prison, ur getting played and shit isn't funny
His first time on a plane, he got excited at a random check cuz he thot they were givin him money

This is ok...ish

This winter's cold, but the chrome I lift and point at your swollen lips is colder
Ur hoe's a bitch, she's like chyeahhh, some1 needs to tell her get off the polar shift is over

Nah

Ur poor as fuck, you rob for pennies, to get paid you just raise eagles
So what little cash he actually gets is tainted....it taint his and it taint legal

LOL. Thats hilarious.

This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key
Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke

Ok


cntrl

Was homeless when he as 17...made a thread one day saying he was the only one logged in

Fox aka witness


I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise
I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news

This is a jab

Sorry about ur childhood but hey life isn't fair
Cuz at 17, I was playing True Crime: Streets of L.A. and you was prolly out living there

He lives in ireland? I get the idea tho.....nothin crazy here.

Nobody likes you and you really need a life dude
Cuz you don't just spend time irl alone, you do it on the site too

Ok

Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless
Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction

Lmao. Dope.

You've neva scored dweeb, stop actin like you givin whores d
You probably only named urself witness, Cuz ur known for telling stories

Ok

All ya rape threats is weird n makes us think ur screwed wit
You created "That Awkward Moment" wayyyy before that new flick

Not feelin it.




Witty is.alot better then i anticipated at battling......

This was mad.close imho..... it came down to the 2 haymakers for me.... ctrls compass.line vs wittys tainted line....

Iunni i kever heard a joke like that before....or seen a line like that in regards to the tainted shit......that shit leaned me hard. Both had equal misses an sum almost quotes w light jabs .....i got witty landing harder more tho


V witty .

[tyler]

Witty had the opener and taint lines the rest just didnt hit well or were too wordy, overall decent verse but nothing too exciting. Ctrl had the Breakin news and compass lines, the rest just didnt work to me, pretty sub par verse from him too but those stood out. Overall I think ctrls verse as a whole was structured a little better and if I had to pick my favorite line I'd go with the compass one although something strikes me as it's been done but I haven't seen it so based on a slight bit of preference and my favorite line I got ctrl literally by a hair tho.

Vote - ctrl

[Alphabet]

My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track
This winter's cold, but the chrome I lift and point at your swollen lips is colder
Ur hoe's a bitch, she's like chyeahhh, some1 needs to tell her get off the polar shift is over

vs

Nobody likes you and you really need a life dude
Cuz you don't just spend time irl alone, you do it on the site too
Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless
Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction

i dunno this battle was pretty even tbh, both had some hits and misses but all in all i'm giving witty the edge for being a bit more consistent, and his quotes hitting harder than ctrls. was digging the schemes/multi link ups as well made for a good read. mvgt witt

[Tettris]

My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track
This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key
Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke

vs

I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise
I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news
Sorry about ur childhood but hey life isn't fair
Cuz at 17, I was playing True Crime: Streets of L.A. and you was prolly out living there

even on quotables...I think Witty put a lil more creativity into this tho so I'm going with him...good battle fellas

v/Witty

My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track
This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key
Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke

vs

Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless
Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction

Got Witty taking this when comparing bar for bar. Quoted I felt had the most impact in which Witty got 2 I felt landed effective and nicely. Cool read guys, keep writing!

v/Witty

[KwaL!ty]

My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track
The way ur living is bummy, I bet it feels like prison, ur getting played and shit isn't funny
His first time on a plane, he got excited at a random check cuz he thot they were givin him money
This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key
Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke


vs

I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise
I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news
Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless
Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction
^bar of battle..

Ctrl had the bar of the battle but his misses where not even really solid jabs ..
Witty surprised me didnt think he was battle type ..


Vote- Witty

[Strikta]

My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track
Aiight
Stop the played rhymes or I'll cop some jail time for hate crimes, u lazy disgrace
As I lay him to waste, you'll see his first original lines come from a blade to his face
Eh
The way ur living is bummy, I bet it feels like prison, ur getting played and shit isn't funny
His first time on a plane, he got excited at a random check cuz he thot they were givin him money
This was ok
This winter's cold, but the chrome I lift and point at your swollen lips is colder
Ur hoe's a bitch, she's like chyeahhh, some1 needs to tell her get off the polar shift is over
Dope
Ur poor as fuck, you rob for pennies, to get paid you just raise eagles
So what little cash he actually gets is tainted....it taint his and it taint legal
I see what u were trying to do, & it didn't work for me
This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key
Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke
Ok close


Vs.


I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise
I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news
Ok
Sorry about ur childhood but hey life isn't fair
Cuz at 17, I was playing True Crime: Streets of L.A. and you was prolly out living there
Nah
Nobody likes you and you really need a life dude
Cuz you don't just spend time irl alone, you do it on the site too
U could have done something better w/ this
Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless
Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction
lol
You've neva scored dweeb, stop actin like you givin whores d
You probably only named urself witness, Cuz ur known for telling stories
Ehh, naw
All ya rape threats is weird n makes us think ur screwed wit
You created "That Awkward Moment" wayyyy before that new flick
Ok close

This was kinda close actually.. I got Witty edging it tho.. he had a more crisp verse & just slightly slicker concepts. They were almost even on quotes I'd say.. it really would all just come down to preference tbh.. & if Ctrl would have came just a tad better idea-wise, or cleaned up his wording some.. he coulda took it in my eyes. Another thing working against him was the explanation at the beginning of the verse, as it is a nono in text to me. U shouldn't ever have to resort to doing that.. it kinda fucks w/ the authenticity of what ur about to have us read. Other than that, props to both of ya'll for a cool read.

Vote- Witty

[Ghost1]

Just got that polar shift line. Damn. That shit was raw....i feel dumb now.

[Sharp]

My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track
ok
Stop the played rhymes or I'll cop some jail time for hate crimes, u lazy disgrace
As I lay him to waste, you'll see his first original lines come from a blade to his face
alright
The way ur living is bummy, I bet it feels like prison, ur getting played and shit isn't funny
His first time on a plane, he got excited at a random check cuz he thot they were givin him money
wasnt feeling
This winter's cold, but the chrome I lift and point at your swollen lips is colder
Ur hoe's a bitch, she's like chyeahhh, some1 needs to tell her get off the polar shift is over
dooope lmao
Ur poor as fuck, you rob for pennies, to get paid you just raise eagles
So what little cash he actually gets is tainted....it taint his and it taint legal
eh
This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key
Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke
lol




I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise
I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news
ok
Sorry about ur childhood but hey life isn't fair
Cuz at 17, I was playing True Crime: Streets of L.A. and you was prolly out living there
eh
Nobody likes you and you really need a life dude
Cuz you don't just spend time irl alone, you do it on the site too
ok
Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless
Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction
solid
You've neva scored dweeb, stop actin like you givin whores d
You probably only named urself witness, Cuz ur known for telling stories
alright
All ya rape threats is weird n makes us think ur screwed wit
You created "That Awkward Moment" wayyyy before that new flick
nice



thought ctrl picked it up by the end but witty was a bit more consistent and harder hitting. good battle

v/witty

[Hush]

Witty



My rhymes bring the fight that ur heart lacks, to leave ur ego dented with hard facts
Ur bars wack, there ain't been a dope CTRL line since Kendrick Lamar's track
-- fire
Stop the played rhymes or I'll cop some jail time for hate crimes, u lazy disgrace
As I lay him to waste, you'll see his first original lines come from a blade to his face
-- played and overworked. Cool swag tho
The way ur living is bummy, I bet it feels like prison, ur getting played and shit isn't funny
His first time on a plane, he got excited at a random check cuz he thot they were givin him money
---dead. Impressed
This winter's cold, but the chrome I lift and point at your swollen lips is colder
Ur hoe's a bitch, she's like chyeahhh, some1 needs to tell her get off the polar shift is over
-- ok tuff
Ur poor as fuck, you rob for pennies, to get paid you just raise eagles
So what little cash he actually gets is tainted....it taint his and it taint legal
-- can't lie sorta don't get it
This lame's feeble, U ain't scary...blow me, ur a fairy u just keep it very low key
Though ur last battle proved to Aero that black people should stay away from Karaoke
--ok


cntrl

Was homeless when he as 17...made a thread one day saying he was the only one logged in

Fox aka witness


I hate this dude, I'm throwin hay makers til he aches n bruise
I'm gonna beat fox 2 the point he'll get a slot on the breakin news
---eh
Sorry about ur childhood but hey life isn't fair
Cuz at 17, I was playing True Crime: Streets of L.A. and you was prolly out living there
--wtf? Ur dissing him cuz u played video games while he was in the street? Damn near auto loss
Nobody likes you and you really need a life dude
Cuz you don't just spend time irl alone, you do it on the site too
-- ok lol
Ur mom's a lost freak. RT that thot is reckless
Every night she let's me compass in her mouth n gets sent back n ur pops direction
--eh
You've neva scored dweeb, stop actin like you givin whores d
You probably only named urself witness, Cuz ur known for telling stories
--could of been so much better
All ya rape threats is weird n makes us think ur screwed wit
You created "That Awkward Moment" wayyyy before that new flick
--dece



Witty got it