ABL Mag, Week 2 Edition - 8/29/06 by Te_Ora

God Of War · 01-24-2013, 12:21 AM

08-30-06

Te Ora (http://www.anotha.com/member.php?u=36)

Intro
-T.O
OMGZ! it seems we've made it past week one and with *shock, horror* a grand total of seven of you showing up by the deadline! after being granted an extra 24 hours another eight of you managed to drop verses, with a further five failing to take advantage of this extension http://www.anotha.com/images/smilies/mad.gif. you might say that that's a pretty nice recovery from what looked like could be a real debacle, but you'd be ignoring the overall quality of the verses. most of you dropped the equivalent of no show verses. because of this a verse of the week hasn't been awarded (i'm far too modest to give it to myself http://www.anotha.com/images/smilies/cool.gif ) and a battle of the week hasn't been either. you should all aim to show your best each week, not doing so merely slows your elevation. with that being said let's take a look at this weeks action..

Battle Reviews

1. MIC REKKIN BASTAD Vs. 20. Bob
bob no-shows, and MRB wins by default

2. Te Ora Vs. 19. Dilated Eyes.
both showed here, pretty one sided matchup.. dilated still has alot to learn, and he shouldn't bold his text although he had some decent concepts that he mighta been able to pull off had he worded them right.. Te Ora took the win and all the votes in this one.

3. Nyce Vs. 18. JonJonOyes
both showed here in this one also, pretty decent battle.. jon had some cliche's but he couldnt get the usage down on them and they merely hit. I had a rushed verse because i was out drinking and made it home past the deadline. Hope you bring fire next week Jon, it was a cool match.

4. Joe Native Vs. 17. Synister
Synister no shows, Joe Native wins by default.

5. Pyr0 Vs. 16. Franchise
this battle was pretty weird but i kind of enjoyed it. both of them had nice short bars with decent flowage in them, not many punches which ended up hurting the two, mostly pyr0 as he lost this one, that hell out of here line was the best in this battle, props to both for showing.

6. Fohkus Vs. 15. Fletcha
decent ish here, Fohkus had some cool concepts at some points but his wording was a problem. Fletcha didnt really have a single punch and he should really stop bolding his rhymes, lol. thats elementary shit i.m.o. no offense, but i liked that his bars werent stretched and ish, but you gotta add punches man.. they are ESSENTIAL, anyways... the proving you right bar was a nice personal. but yeah, fohkus ended up coming out on top in this one.

7. Da Big Glassman Vs. 14. MC Dangerous
both lose but will get a chance to redeem themselves. if they no show again they'll be in a hole too deep to get out of.

8. Sin Vs. 13. -ThaMenace-
Sin no shows and is replaced out of the league.. and menace gets no show shine for the week. props dude, and sin FUCK YOU

9. MC J3RSEY Vs. 12. Prozpekt
decent battle here, definately the closest one this week. Jersey had a more personal verse, some of his wording was off and the punches he tried were pretty wack.. but his personals were decent.. prozpekt came with a cool verse i mean, i hate the stretched style and shit. dude had decent meta's and ish but he some of them were kinda corny or forced. in the end Jersey won and prozpekt got one vote.

10. Sp!tf!r3 Vs. 11. westkeptsecret
pretty clear here, spit had a better verse it was more polished but some of the punches in there i wasnt feeling and the cox wordplay was used by my great grandfather. but westkept lacked punches and its better to bring bad punches than no punches at all kids. this was an ehh battle, but spit came out on top. the grate line was pretty cool though. & westkept just keep at it man, read some battles so you get a feel of what punches are and try to bring out some concepts next week.

Top 12 Punches.

Menace To Sin
Sin is known only to talk trash and spew out curses
The first half of that is true only to his verses

Dilated Eyes To Te Ora
an ya said ya make art wit words, but that aint -saying- -much
cuz if ya were refering ya lyrics to art..ya -paintings- -suck-!

Jon To Nyce
usin street talk so you can chalk out your life
''No man is an island''
but yet everyone manages to walk over nyce

Fohkus To Fletcha
Got ya like bad pick up lines, cause u'll never be able to hit this
N ya bitch is as clear as day, cause everything's open for buisness

spitfire To westkeptsecret
Zero to zero, please just check-in abate
Like a rushed cheese shredder...
...you're only seconds to grate

prozpekt To Jersey
These~Days Aint~Many~Thats~Sick so if "youre Jones'n for a squeeze~play", better Shake~Jennys~Fat~Tits
bert gets worse trying to Make~Any~Damage so like kids from southpark, You Shouldnt Take~Kenny~Chances!!

Fohkus To Fletcha
N you like counting wars...cause you never fuckin one in a fight
U don't think u'll do well in the league, n im just prooving u right

Te Ora To Dilated Eyes
your not smart.. should drop nothing instead of your rhymes
it's like your in august and i'm in december..
i'm THAT far ahead of your time

Franchise To Pyr0
This site is ‘hot’ man its promisinly ‘bright’..
Pyro?.. The one who ‘gets the hell outta’ this site..

Jon To Nyce
God loked at nyce and the alphabet, got to 'L' an made that for him
cus like retards in school, Nyce 'D'grades the forum

Jersey To prozpekt
Anywhere you at, Got Hard Rhymes Shit My Flow'll Go There
Like a crowded Six Flags, Them 'Long Lines' Ain't Goin No Where

Te Ora To Dilated Eyes
your punches are avg as fuck.. yet you still paste em for us
you could have nyce hooks.. but ytf would he waste a chorus?

DOPENESS!

-Nyce

Bitch of the Week
i'm not one to pick on individuals..
so it's only fair that i throw all of the no showing assholes under the same blanket! generally this section will be awarded to one person who bitches about votes, groans about the rules, or gays up the chat thread - but this week we had a league with more bitches than a girls night out. i honestly don't care about your excuses - if your going to sign up to a league you should be organized enough to show up ESPECIALLY on the first week. if you were planning to go on a holiday then maybe you should've waited until you got back to sign up. your all lucky i like bitches, because of this some of you were given a second chance. anyone who needed the mass 24 hour extension gets runner up for this prestidgious award http://www.anotha.com/images/smilies/rolleyes.gif

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01-24-2013, 12:21 AM	#1
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,822 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493983	ABL Mag, Week 2 Edition - 8/29/06 by Te_Ora 08-30-06 Te Ora (http://www.anotha.com/member.php?u=36) Intro -T.O OMGZ! it seems we've made it past week one and with shock, horror a grand total of seven of you showing up by the deadline! after being granted an extra 24 hours another eight of you managed to drop verses, with a further five failing to take advantage of this extension http://www.anotha.com/images/smilies/mad.gif. you might say that that's a pretty nice recovery from what looked like could be a real debacle, but you'd be ignoring the overall quality of the verses. most of you dropped the equivalent of no show verses. because of this a verse of the week hasn't been awarded (i'm far too modest to give it to myself http://www.anotha.com/images/smilies/cool.gif ) and a battle of the week hasn't been either. you should all aim to show your best each week, not doing so merely slows your elevation. with that being said let's take a look at this weeks action.. Battle Reviews 1. MIC REKKIN BASTAD Vs. 20. Bob bob no-shows, and MRB wins by default 2. Te Ora Vs. 19. Dilated Eyes. both showed here, pretty one sided matchup.. dilated still has alot to learn, and he shouldn't bold his text although he had some decent concepts that he mighta been able to pull off had he worded them right.. Te Ora took the win and all the votes in this one. 3. Nyce Vs. 18. JonJonOyes both showed here in this one also, pretty decent battle.. jon had some cliche's but he couldnt get the usage down on them and they merely hit. I had a rushed verse because i was out drinking and made it home past the deadline. Hope you bring fire next week Jon, it was a cool match. 4. Joe Native Vs. 17. Synister Synister no shows, Joe Native wins by default. 5. Pyr0 Vs. 16. Franchise this battle was pretty weird but i kind of enjoyed it. both of them had nice short bars with decent flowage in them, not many punches which ended up hurting the two, mostly pyr0 as he lost this one, that hell out of here line was the best in this battle, props to both for showing. 6. Fohkus Vs. 15. Fletcha decent ish here, Fohkus had some cool concepts at some points but his wording was a problem. Fletcha didnt really have a single punch and he should really stop bolding his rhymes, lol. thats elementary shit i.m.o. no offense, but i liked that his bars werent stretched and ish, but you gotta add punches man.. they are ESSENTIAL, anyways... the proving you right bar was a nice personal. but yeah, fohkus ended up coming out on top in this one. 7. Da Big Glassman Vs. 14. MC Dangerous both lose but will get a chance to redeem themselves. if they no show again they'll be in a hole too deep to get out of. 8. Sin Vs. 13. -ThaMenace- Sin no shows and is replaced out of the league.. and menace gets no show shine for the week. props dude, and sin FUCK YOU 9. MC J3RSEY Vs. 12. Prozpekt decent battle here, definately the closest one this week. Jersey had a more personal verse, some of his wording was off and the punches he tried were pretty wack.. but his personals were decent.. prozpekt came with a cool verse i mean, i hate the stretched style and shit. dude had decent meta's and ish but he some of them were kinda corny or forced. in the end Jersey won and prozpekt got one vote. 10. Sp!tf!r3 Vs. 11. westkeptsecret pretty clear here, spit had a better verse it was more polished but some of the punches in there i wasnt feeling and the cox wordplay was used by my great grandfather. but westkept lacked punches and its better to bring bad punches than no punches at all kids. this was an ehh battle, but spit came out on top. the grate line was pretty cool though. & westkept just keep at it man, read some battles so you get a feel of what punches are and try to bring out some concepts next week. Top 12 Punches. Menace To Sin Sin is known only to talk trash and spew out curses The first half of that is true only to his verses Dilated Eyes To Te Ora an ya said ya make art wit words, but that aint -saying- -much cuz if ya were refering ya lyrics to art..ya -paintings- -suck-! Jon To Nyce usin street talk so you can chalk out your life ''No man is an island'' but yet everyone manages to walk over nyce Fohkus To Fletcha Got ya like bad pick up lines, cause u'll never be able to hit this N ya bitch is as clear as day, cause everything's open for buisness spitfire To westkeptsecret Zero to zero, please just check-in abate Like a rushed cheese shredder... ...you're only seconds to grate prozpekt To Jersey These~Days Aint~Many~Thats~Sick so if "youre Jones'n for a squeeze~play", better Shake~Jennys~Fat~Tits bert gets worse trying to Make~Any~Damage so like kids from southpark, You Shouldnt Take~Kenny~Chances!! Fohkus To Fletcha N you like counting wars...cause you never fuckin one in a fight U don't think u'll do well in the league, n im just prooving u right Te Ora To Dilated Eyes your not smart.. should drop nothing instead of your rhymes it's like your in august and i'm in december.. i'm THAT far ahead of your time Franchise To Pyr0 This site is ‘hot’ man its promisinly ‘bright’.. Pyro?.. The one who ‘gets the hell outta’ this site.. Jon To Nyce God loked at nyce and the alphabet, got to 'L' an made that for him cus like retards in school, Nyce 'D'grades the forum Jersey To prozpekt Anywhere you at, Got Hard Rhymes Shit My Flow'll Go There Like a crowded Six Flags, Them 'Long Lines' Ain't Goin No Where Te Ora To Dilated Eyes your punches are avg as fuck.. yet you still paste em for us you could have nyce hooks.. but ytf would he waste a chorus? DOPENESS! -Nyce Bitch of the Week i'm not one to pick on individuals.. so it's only fair that i throw all of the no showing assholes under the same blanket! generally this section will be awarded to one person who bitches about votes, groans about the rules, or gays up the chat thread - but this week we had a league with more bitches than a girls night out. i honestly don't care about your excuses - if your going to sign up to a league you should be organized enough to show up ESPECIALLY on the first week. if you were planning to go on a holiday then maybe you should've waited until you got back to sign up. your all lucky i like bitches, because of this some of you were given a second chance. anyone who needed the mass 24 hour extension gets runner up for this prestidgious award http://www.anotha.com/images/smilies/rolleyes.gif No Show Shine