02-26-2013, 09:58 AM | #1 |
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Sharp Nine vs. Witty {Sharp Nine wins}
Round 2 Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Tuesday, March 5th 2013 11:59 PM PST. Voting ends Friday 11:59 PM PST. (Battles that lack votes may close later.) (One sided battles may get closed early.) (Extensions can be no longer than 36 hours and have to be granted by your opponent.) Line Limit: Min. = 10 lines Max. = 16 lines (The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.) Voting: Must vote on 5 battles and post your links. Post the links in the thread titled "Round 2 Voting Links". You will be punished if you don't post all 5 voting links. You will not like the punishment, so just vote so you don't have to cry later. General Rules: 1st person can't edit after the 2nd person posts. 2nd person can't edit after a vote has been made. Feeding = DQ. Recycling = DQ. Biting = DQ. No freeposting, swaying or bitching. Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post MUST match the 1st person's line amount. @Sharp Nine @Witty |
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02-26-2013, 03:04 PM | #4 |
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10 is cool....g'luck man.
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02-28-2013, 11:35 AM | #5 |
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I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast
Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass He on split's dick, that's why split split, he friggin' hates him This fag saw the name split 8, and took it as a sexual invitation This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped See bitch at this beef shit you're nothing..just a fan, a tourist I told this boy to nail a chick, and he came back as a man...icurist When it comes to battling, you suck...u shud never be in a bout again We all know 9 times out of 10, we'll see Nine down for a count of ten I'm out, that's 10.
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03-03-2013, 03:13 PM | #6 |
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chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead
ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone n you bump thrift shop? no way ur holdin tha win already got my grandpa's style, those verses look older than him guaranteed L, those shit jokes make us think this herb's retarded you ain't got Sharp, Wit. But we knew that waaaay before this tourney started |
03-03-2013, 09:03 PM | #7 |
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I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast
Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass He on split's dick, that's why split split, he friggin' hates him This fag saw the name split 8, and took it as a sexual invitation This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped vs chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone damn. this was close as fuck, both yall had great lines. you each had the same number of quotables smh...i honestly wanna call draw but that wouldnt fly...ima read again...
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03-03-2013, 09:08 PM | #8 |
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When it comes to battling, you suck...u shud never be in a bout again
We all know 9 times out of 10, we'll see Nine down for a count of ten vs guaranteed L, those shit jokes make us think this herb's retarded you ain't got Sharp, Wit. But we knew that waaaay before this tourney started ok. after reading this again, it came down to the closer and ima have to give the edge to sharp nine. his closer was the better nameplay. dope shit fellas, this was a great battle. vote: Sharp Nine
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03-05-2013, 10:40 AM | #9 | ||
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03-07-2013, 07:32 PM | #10 |
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I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast
Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass lmao dope opener. He on split's dick, that's why split split, he friggin' hates him This fag saw the name split 8, and took it as a sexual invitation coo This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped I dont know if this was a personal or not but it was cool See bitch at this beef shit you're nothing..just a fan, a tourist I told this boy to nail a chick, and he came back as a man...icurist Nice, worded well When it comes to battling, you suck...u shud never be in a bout again We all know 9 times out of 10, we'll see Nine down for a count of ten Cool closer, maybe couldve been executed better. VS chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed Lol nice text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is this is aight, couldve hit harder we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone dope n you bump thrift shop? no way ur holdin tha win already got my grandpa's style, those verses look older than him lol coo guaranteed L, those shit jokes make us think this herb's retarded you ain't got Sharp, Wit. But we knew that waaaay before this tourney started great closer Ahhh this was real close lol. I mean sharp had some nice hits Like his closer. And Witty hit hard and worded his bars well. This was a real dope match. ahh fuck this is hard. I enjoyed witty verse more but Sharp had nicer nameplays. V/ Witty Dope ass battle
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03-07-2013, 09:01 PM | #11 |
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I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast
Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped vs chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone Witty, ur opener was cool. when its said aloud it sounds better, than it actually reads. made me lol tho stan shadys been down but i like how you flipped it with a nameplay.. closer coulda been nicer if it had been executed better. not a bad verse, rest of the lines were decent. Sharp pronounced wit was nice, outwit was predictable but i liked how you covered up the aha moment, setup was a lil eh tho. state of the art was kinda like wittys opener to me sounded better aloud. You trail off at the end of the verse, even the structure and flow was a bit diff. so im not sure what happened concepts were but the werent as fleshed out as your other lines. v/ Sharp |
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03-08-2013, 02:21 PM | #13 |
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3-2, Sharp Nine. Up for more votes.
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03-10-2013, 11:16 PM | #14 |
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i have sharp edging this w/ consistency,wording n concept choice.. overall just hit a little harder than witty.
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03-11-2013, 02:21 AM | #15 |
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I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast
Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass cool multies... name punch was okaaaaayyyy.... bit dull He on split's dick, that's why split split, he friggin' hates him This fag saw the name split 8, and took it as a sexual invitation decent personal concept... worded alright This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped good, your best bar See bitch at this beef shit you're nothing..just a fan, a tourist I told this boy to nail a chick, and he came back as a man...icurist concept's been done before but otherwise all the elements of a good bar were there... you just need concepts that aren't played - that will come with experience/being around for a while When it comes to battling, you suck...u shud never be in a bout again We all know 9 times out of 10, we'll see Nine down for a count of ten not bad Got some potential pal, keep dropping chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed good nameflip, worded well text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is not bad we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone decent nameplay n you bump thrift shop? no way ur holdin tha win already got my grandpa's style, those verses look older than him cool personal guaranteed L, those shit jokes make us think this herb's retarded you ain't got Sharp, Wit. But we knew that waaaay before this tourney started cool double nameflip, well worded Sharp showed a little more skill throughout his verse... he got it v/ Sharp |
03-11-2013, 02:49 AM | #16 |
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opener, SN Em
vs. opener, state of the art, outwit, closer Sharp was damn consistent, good stuff. I could see him being a top contender type of guy pretty soon TBH, w/ some wording tune ups Witty did his thing too, but it wasn't enough IMO props to both, cool battle guys. V/Sharp 9
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