Jerry Lee Lewis Had Great Balls

Void · 02-20-2013, 11:36 AM

This damaging rhythmic patterning is systemically dismantling the soul of solar systems with my supernova shoulder missiles. No existent code of physics knows the onus of my limits. Mood controlling cute occultist. Swooning troves of sultry women with his limerick lulled addiction. The ruse aroma poet penchant. Smooth/consoling. So deliberate. Prudes opposed to prone positions reduced to doting post submissives, just from prose, a poem or sentence. Grooming those with co-dependence. Coax the lonely lows within 'em. I’m a mimic, a reflection for the wishes you’ve projected. All your senses are subjected to the image I’ve suggested. The image you’re obsessed with. Every sentence a clue to what’s predicted to move your particular mood. ’til I’ve scripted and glued you to what I pretended to do. I just listen and choose. You’re defenseless, I’m through. Art dependent loner style of a narcissistic only child. Hardly living. Broken down. Heart defensive. Mostly frowns. Scarred existence. Soaked in doubt. Guarded cynic. Hopeless grouch. Trashcan Oscar. Swatting away these lap dance offers. Fat chance, Lauper, I'm watching a movie, plus your stupid ass song ain't belong in The Goonies. Boxing with groupies. It's like bum fights, but better. I hate you. Writing my love life a letter. Tongue tied? No never. Punchlines so clever. No effort, quite the effair. All your messy raps and weak jeers, end with silence, a sigh and, '... guess you had to be there.' Less impactive. He's weird. Kid's so sick, though. Clicking on porn with music is like getting Rick Rolled. Laughing manically. Bag with a dairy. Fudge packing butt piracy. Fuck traffic, I'm flying WEEEEEEEEEEEEE. Beast mode. Where we're going we don't NEED roads. Just McGuyver's will. A machete and survivor skills. Bear Grills. Earth's a fucking island built atop a comet. I'll reveal the common knowledge with writing quills. Murder perceptions with lecture's worded perfection. Merlin with letters. Better. Got sermons purring when petted. Chewing on a smoking pipe without any smoke or light. Purely aesthetic. Mercy, it's hectic the way these furnaces measure my worth and successes. No one's worthy of getting turns when I'm just'this flirty with sketches. With every morning sun that warms me up, I get more and more gray. Now a friend with benefits just means their pension is, 401(k). It's a poker throw to show your soul, but I'mma go for broke off her. 'cause I'm a triple-dog daredevil. The frozen pole vaulter.

Geno · 02-21-2013, 12:43 PM

Dullboy ...or perhaps -curse?

Dope syllable shit. This was jam packed with crazyness. Upping

Void · 02-21-2013, 01:56 PM

Dull. How goes it, sir? I like what you've done with the place.

Split · 02-21-2013, 02:25 PM

Who's @Darth Yoda then?

I smell shenanigans

Darth Yoda · 02-21-2013, 03:04 PM

You smell nothing. We're a network of souls. Theres more.

Split · 02-21-2013, 03:08 PM

Hahaha i'll hack ur network, b

Anyways nice drop.I liked the Limerick lulled addiction line a lot

Darth Yoda · 02-22-2013, 12:04 AM

That'll be one way to make the site die quicker.

dull boy · 03-25-2018, 11:21 AM

upping

ACTIVATE SELF · 03-25-2018, 11:44 AM

Wow, Big Baby you can rhyme. Never said you couldn't. This was a dope lyrical exercise. I enjoyed it.

Eŋg · 03-28-2018, 06:01 PM

dull boy is void (as stated in this thread) - neither of which are big baby.

yoda is either big baby or a third entity formerly known as bwaha who may also have been big baby.

it's a bit vague... but dull, at least on NC from what i've read, is distinct mainly because his writing tends to be tidier. the other(s) - likely one person, at most two - are looser in their methods. i haven't even read that closely to discern this.

it doesn't really matter, though. they can all rhyme.

CopyPat · 04-01-2018, 12:19 PM

hahahhahaha, obviously awesome and i love the fuck out of it.
too many quotables, but flirty with sketchers stuck out for some reason. ha.

didn't read to me as smoothly as most have in the past but another re-read will probably help. i think also its because you switched schemes so often so it made it a little hard to catch the rhyme immediately and made me have to keep going back a bunch. my only criticism though, shit was rapid fire and original and fun. loved it.

didn't suck, thx

02-20-2013, 11:36 AM	#1
Void Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 221 Rep Power: 0	Jerry Lee Lewis Had Great Balls This damaging rhythmic patterning is systemically dismantling the soul of solar systems with my supernova shoulder missiles. No existent code of physics knows the onus of my limits. Mood controlling cute occultist. Swooning troves of sultry women with his limerick lulled addiction. The ruse aroma poet penchant. Smooth/consoling. So deliberate. Prudes opposed to prone positions reduced to doting post submissives, just from prose, a poem or sentence. Grooming those with co-dependence. Coax the lonely lows within 'em. I’m a mimic, a reflection for the wishes you’ve projected. All your senses are subjected to the image I’ve suggested. The image you’re obsessed with. Every sentence a clue to what’s predicted to move your particular mood. ’til I’ve scripted and glued you to what I pretended to do. I just listen and choose. You’re defenseless, I’m through. Art dependent loner style of a narcissistic only child. Hardly living. Broken down. Heart defensive. Mostly frowns. Scarred existence. Soaked in doubt. Guarded cynic. Hopeless grouch. Trashcan Oscar. Swatting away these lap dance offers. Fat chance, Lauper, I'm watching a movie, plus your stupid ass song ain't belong in The Goonies. Boxing with groupies. It's like bum fights, but better. I hate you. Writing my love life a letter. Tongue tied? No never. Punchlines so clever. No effort, quite the effair. All your messy raps and weak jeers, end with silence, a sigh and, '... guess you had to be there.' Less impactive. He's weird. Kid's so sick, though. Clicking on porn with music is like getting Rick Rolled. Laughing manically. Bag with a dairy. Fudge packing butt piracy. Fuck traffic, I'm flying WEEEEEEEEEEEEE. Beast mode. Where we're going we don't NEED roads. Just McGuyver's will. A machete and survivor skills. Bear Grills. Earth's a fucking island built atop a comet. I'll reveal the common knowledge with writing quills. Murder perceptions with lecture's worded perfection. Merlin with letters. Better. Got sermons purring when petted. Chewing on a smoking pipe without any smoke or light. Purely aesthetic. Mercy, it's hectic the way these furnaces measure my worth and successes. No one's worthy of getting turns when I'm just'this flirty with sketches. With every morning sun that warms me up, I get more and more gray. Now a friend with benefits just means their pension is, 401(k). It's a poker throw to show your soul, but I'mma go for broke off her. 'cause I'm a triple-dog daredevil. The frozen pole vaulter.

02-21-2013, 12:43 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,330 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	Dullboy ...or perhaps -curse? Dope syllable shit. This was jam packed with crazyness. Upping __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

02-21-2013, 02:25 PM	#4
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,904 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899395	Who's @Darth Yoda then? I smell shenanigans __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

02-21-2013, 03:08 PM	#6
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,904 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899395	Hahaha i'll hack ur network, b Anyways nice drop.I liked the Limerick lulled addiction line a lot __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

03-28-2018, 06:01 PM	#10
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,146 Rep Power: 0	dull boy is void (as stated in this thread) - neither of which are big baby. yoda is either big baby or a third entity formerly known as bwaha who may also have been big baby. it's a bit vague... but dull, at least on NC from what i've read, is distinct mainly because his writing tends to be tidier. the other(s) - likely one person, at most two - are looser in their methods. i haven't even read that closely to discern this. it doesn't really matter, though. they can all rhyme. Last edited by Eŋg; 03-28-2018 at 06:03 PM.

02-21-2013, 01:56 PM	#3
Void Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 221 Rep Power: 0	Dull. How goes it, sir? I like what you've done with the place.

02-21-2013, 03:04 PM	#5
Darth Yoda Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 408 Battle Record: 6-2 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF Rep Power: 20182436	You smell nothing. We're a network of souls. Theres more.

02-22-2013, 12:04 AM	#7
Darth Yoda Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 408 Battle Record: 6-2 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF Rep Power: 20182436	That'll be one way to make the site die quicker.

03-25-2018, 11:21 AM	#8
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,075 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345600	upping

03-25-2018, 11:44 AM	#9
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 732 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584275	Wow, Big Baby you can rhyme. Never said you couldn't. This was a dope lyrical exercise. I enjoyed it.

04-01-2018, 12:19 PM	#11
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742222	hahahhahaha, obviously awesome and i love the fuck out of it. too many quotables, but flirty with sketchers stuck out for some reason. ha. didn't read to me as smoothly as most have in the past but another re-read will probably help. i think also its because you switched schemes so often so it made it a little hard to catch the rhyme immediately and made me have to keep going back a bunch. my only criticism though, shit was rapid fire and original and fun. loved it. didn't suck, thx __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.