B.itch A.ss N.igga

Geno · 11-08-2013, 07:05 PM

I ain't wrote a good verse in some time
or at least not one that wasn't personalized
That doesn't speak about the burdens of mine
The fire insides dying, but the furnace alive
Refurbishing rhymes for some sort of relief
Body temp climbing above normal degrees
Need a glass of the pacific, or some coral to drink
Tap the Volcanic ash from this newport in the sink
My new formulas trash, the old one was a classic
Haters gonna fucking hate, so what if it happens
Shrug shoulders with captains, rest of you are a waste
Turning your backs on a reality that's to hard to face
Pressing your pen down, pissed, til it flew off the page
Shackled by others opinions, chew off your legs
Your pegs, I'm to off the registry to register that
Check the records, by consensus I have never been wack
I can't level with fags on a lower rung of the climb
Voice is hard to recognize, plus it struggles with mine
Either you ugly or high, or you possibly wasted
Teeth are green with envy, hygiene is probably ancient
Ill stomp the statement lars is dope in concrete like a punter
To prove that gay shits an impression that nobodies under
Never roll with assumption, s'why facts all I produce
You have a list, you should scratch life off your to do's
I offer the news, my roots, and the cancer is calling
Fuck with me, pay the morgue in advance for embalming
I don't panick at all when so called threats are around
Always down to fuck you up, so what direction you bout?
Wreckless, profound, and never think ahead when I act
your all talk and no action, bronson's better with rap

PancakeBrah · 11-08-2013, 07:26 PM

dope.

This reminded me of Jay-Z's 'Blueprint 2' track. Not in terms of rhyme schemes or literal content but the overarching theme. It's not a diss but instead a reaffirmation of self with subtle slights to the people and critiques against you. The opening line set the entire tone for the piece and I thoroughly enjoyed it. This is what I'm talking about Geno. The style is still you but some personality got fleshed out and there was real momentum to this piece. One of my favorites from you. Good shit.

breathless · 11-08-2013, 07:29 PM

This was one of the first enjoyable braggard pieces I've read in a while, flow was pretty solid, but, almost too predictable. The constant 1,2. - 3,4... Old in and out, but, this killed throuout, had a lot of relatable clever lines, I was feeling it a lot more in the beginning though...
Most enjoyable quip was
Need a glass of the pacific, or some coral to drink
Tap the Volcanic ash from this newport in the sink
My new formulas trash, the old one was a classic
Haters gonna fucking hate, so what if it happens

ill nik-A · 11-08-2013, 09:21 PM

This was nice all throughout, complete verse, each line carried by the previous, I enjoyed it
Flow was solid, good shit amigo

Objective · 11-08-2013, 09:34 PM

Dope flow throughout, easy to read through and to the point shit without being stuff you need to read twice to understand. One thing is writing something complex, another thing is making it easy to understand and even seem simplistic while it's not. Fuck it, what I'm trying to say is; this shit was dope and I enjoyed the read a lot. Solid drop.

lol'd at this shit:
Either you ugly or high, or you possibly wasted
Teeth are green with envy, hygiene is probably ancient

Keep it up. Dope ish.

Geno · 11-09-2013, 11:31 AM

I wanna thank everyone for the kind words. @PancakeBrah ..I just relistened to that track, thanks man. That's sort of the effect I'm driving for. Thanks for the comparison

CopyPat · 11-10-2013, 01:15 PM

hahah geno and lars beefing wtf.. i heart u both!

anyways geno i really liked this bruv, good to see other dudes keeping their bars at proper lengths with audio in mind. proppers for that as usual. you have really really gotten alot better in my eyes in the last like 2 3 months all of a sudden hit a new level. i felt like u were always good or whatever but now its really really good all the time. its sick to see man. ur shit is kinda getting to be like deadman in the polished effortless smoothness and no filler, legit content. super dope.

I'm to off the registry to register that
Check the records, by consensus I have never been wack
I can't level with fags on a lower rung of the climb

^fav part right in the middle. another awesome drop dude, stay up.

peep my 2 latest, i tried something a lil more emo in my better days one hahha.. Def not really my style but ppl wanting more substance from me in my content so i went for it.. tell me what u think. also just dropped a new traditional style copypat lol, u know that FLOW

11-08-2013, 07:05 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	B.itch A.ss N.igga I ain't wrote a good verse in some time or at least not one that wasn't personalized That doesn't speak about the burdens of mine The fire insides dying, but the furnace alive Refurbishing rhymes for some sort of relief Body temp climbing above normal degrees Need a glass of the pacific, or some coral to drink Tap the Volcanic ash from this newport in the sink My new formulas trash, the old one was a classic Haters gonna fucking hate, so what if it happens Shrug shoulders with captains, rest of you are a waste Turning your backs on a reality that's to hard to face Pressing your pen down, pissed, til it flew off the page Shackled by others opinions, chew off your legs Your pegs, I'm to off the registry to register that Check the records, by consensus I have never been wack I can't level with fags on a lower rung of the climb Voice is hard to recognize, plus it struggles with mine Either you ugly or high, or you possibly wasted Teeth are green with envy, hygiene is probably ancient Ill stomp the statement lars is dope in concrete like a punter To prove that gay shits an impression that nobodies under Never roll with assumption, s'why facts all I produce You have a list, you should scratch life off your to do's I offer the news, my roots, and the cancer is calling Fuck with me, pay the morgue in advance for embalming I don't panick at all when so called threats are around Always down to fuck you up, so what direction you bout? Wreckless, profound, and never think ahead when I act your all talk and no action, bronson's better with rap __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

11-08-2013, 07:26 PM	#2
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	dope. This reminded me of Jay-Z's 'Blueprint 2' track. Not in terms of rhyme schemes or literal content but the overarching theme. It's not a diss but instead a reaffirmation of self with subtle slights to the people and critiques against you. The opening line set the entire tone for the piece and I thoroughly enjoyed it. This is what I'm talking about Geno. The style is still you but some personality got fleshed out and there was real momentum to this piece. One of my favorites from you. Good shit. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

11-08-2013, 07:29 PM	#3
breathless Master of Beastiality Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Lansing, Mi Posts: 368 Battle Record: 4-6 Rep Power: 0	This was one of the first enjoyable braggard pieces I've read in a while, flow was pretty solid, but, almost too predictable. The constant 1,2. - 3,4... Old in and out, but, this killed throuout, had a lot of relatable clever lines, I was feeling it a lot more in the beginning though... Most enjoyable quip was Need a glass of the pacific, or some coral to drink Tap the Volcanic ash from this newport in the sink My new formulas trash, the old one was a classic Haters gonna fucking hate, so what if it happens __________________ I used to be amazing... http://soundcloud.com/dancourser/sets

11-08-2013, 09:21 PM	#4
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	This was nice all throughout, complete verse, each line carried by the previous, I enjoyed it Flow was solid, good shit amigo __________________ Grumpy old man.

11-08-2013, 09:34 PM	#5
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	Dope flow throughout, easy to read through and to the point shit without being stuff you need to read twice to understand. One thing is writing something complex, another thing is making it easy to understand and even seem simplistic while it's not. Fuck it, what I'm trying to say is; this shit was dope and I enjoyed the read a lot. Solid drop. lol'd at this shit: Either you ugly or high, or you possibly wasted Teeth are green with envy, hygiene is probably ancient Keep it up. Dope ish. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

11-09-2013, 11:31 AM	#6
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	I wanna thank everyone for the kind words. @PancakeBrah ..I just relistened to that track, thanks man. That's sort of the effect I'm driving for. Thanks for the comparison __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

11-10-2013, 01:15 PM	#7
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	hahah geno and lars beefing wtf.. i heart u both! anyways geno i really liked this bruv, good to see other dudes keeping their bars at proper lengths with audio in mind. proppers for that as usual. you have really really gotten alot better in my eyes in the last like 2 3 months all of a sudden hit a new level. i felt like u were always good or whatever but now its really really good all the time. its sick to see man. ur shit is kinda getting to be like deadman in the polished effortless smoothness and no filler, legit content. super dope. I'm to off the registry to register that Check the records, by consensus I have never been wack I can't level with fags on a lower rung of the climb ^fav part right in the middle. another awesome drop dude, stay up. peep my 2 latest, i tried something a lil more emo in my better days one hahha.. Def not really my style but ppl wanting more substance from me in my content so i went for it.. tell me what u think. also just dropped a new traditional style copypat lol, u know that FLOW __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.