Vinnie Paz - "Is Happiness Just A Word?"

Neighbor · 10-28-2013, 10:41 PM

Beginning of second verse is unghhh

uh-oh · 10-28-2013, 11:29 PM

i wish this wasnt so gay with the bells and queer on the chorus

pretty dope other than that

veritas · 10-28-2013, 11:35 PM

hologram >

Fig · 10-28-2013, 11:40 PM

eh

NYCSPITZ · 10-29-2013, 12:33 AM

ya dope

Objective · 10-29-2013, 01:35 AM

It was allright at best tbh. Dope that he shows some of his softer sides, but it didn't have to be full blown emo. Some lines in here was dope af and extremely relatable at times, but I thought the execution of most of the lines came off as weak to me as opposed to what he's capable of in terms of wordplay/metaphores etc. I mean... If you're gonna make a track about depression n shit; don't make the sentences bland. Opinions are like assholes etc.. My rating: 5.5/10.

151 · 10-29-2013, 02:25 AM

GI jane brought this down but yea its relatable

oats · 10-29-2013, 02:28 AM

thought it was dope, raw shit.

Paradigm · 10-29-2013, 05:19 AM

dope

Neighbor · 10-29-2013, 01:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by uh-oh

i wish this wasnt so gay with the bells and queer on the chorus

Yes Alexander is a chick lol

10-28-2013, 11:40 PM	#4
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,461 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181562	eh __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

10-29-2013, 01:35 AM	#6
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	It was allright at best tbh. Dope that he shows some of his softer sides, but it didn't have to be full blown emo. Some lines in here was dope af and extremely relatable at times, but I thought the execution of most of the lines came off as weak to me as opposed to what he's capable of in terms of wordplay/metaphores etc. I mean... If you're gonna make a track about depression n shit; don't make the sentences bland. Opinions are like assholes etc.. My rating: 5.5/10. __________________ I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave, So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o

10-29-2013, 02:28 AM	#8
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	thought it was dope, raw shit. __________________ You should be water

10-28-2013, 11:29 PM	#2
uh-oh DA GOD Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Canton Ohio Posts: 12,362 Battle Record: 1-0 Champed - Beat Battle II - Beat Battle V - Beat Bags Rep Power: 84181420	i wish this wasnt so gay with the bells and queer on the chorus pretty dope other than that

10-29-2013, 12:33 AM	#5
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	ya dope

10-29-2013, 02:25 AM	#7
151 Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 40 Battle Record: 0-3 Rep Power: 38	GI jane brought this down but yea its relatable

10-29-2013, 05:19 AM	#9
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033512	dope