Week 5 - Just Write (3-0) vs. Vividlyvague (3-1) - VIVIDLYVAGUE WINS BY NS

Mike Wrecka · 10-21-2013, 11:13 AM

Season 2

Rules

Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST

Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST

Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree

Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread, preferably all in one post.

If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss. If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension.

Topic

Good Luck @Just Write @Vividlyvague

e11even · 10-24-2013, 04:41 AM

Ante up. Checking in.

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=26805

Just Write · 10-24-2013, 11:45 AM

Check.. ill try to write something today but I've been busy this week. Might need that ext my dude. Ill try to drop today though

e11even · 10-24-2013, 12:25 PM

Ok. Np.

e11even · 10-25-2013, 01:27 AM

Finally, that gradient visible, light fades into this abandoned tone,
the quiet darkness long awakened in my rapidly slowing heart... together we're headed home. Goodniii....

The approach of friendlies... it's so welcomed, yet too late.
But as lovers are meant, we seemingly merge in spirit, cresting this wave
of regret. We sway, grasping ever so gently, but in a desperate way...
Tears flowing freely from me as she lay, Why'd she have to go?!
Eyes locked with eyelids... expecting a perk up... with an, "I really can't stay"....

Her last breaths betray her as I remove the jagged blade,
Minoo her name, I screamed it as she painfully wept out the pain...
Staring into the soul of her eyes as blood crept out that mangled gape,
I felt her thoughts... her insides draping the dirt, it was me she blamed...

Confused anger... an oxidized but flickering flame, Why did this have to happen?! Lord, why me this day?!?!
"Only I had your best interest at heart!" She managed to say..."It seems to be only these childish games we play!!"
Tears forcing my look away...

Vases expelling water as they toppled, I collected her dropping body...
Gasping as she fell into my arms, while they fled out of the lobby.
Anger rising as the sparking embers in a furnace, I promptly
Radioed the Quick Reaction to catch these targets, and their ambush posse.

Ka-Bar at the ready... tactical approach in motion...
Wrapping around each wall, I crept closer... the notion: be like cloaked men.
Door breached, I slither into the garden square... they're posted. Minoo!! Fucking Bitch!!!
The betrayal in full swing. And by the sound of it there, she's devoted.
Marksmen here. Beyond aware, I boasted, These pawns look bloated...
Out of the shadows I leapt!!! A full lunge into her gut as rifles ripped,
penetrated organs ignored... eye to eye with her, I hold it, focused.

Radio static, jumbled traffic...I can't hear shit under all these Afghan powerlines!
One radio down, we were travelling back to the FOB to dine... then...
"Vic one- this is Cobra Proper!! Come in!!" we're excited. Fuck! Its about time!!!
"Send your traffic, over?" Maddox on the handset mashing dials...
"Its that bitch PFC James was with!!! She's giving us up to those CIA guys!!!"
The entire humvee staring at me... I defend my position in kind,
"Get the grid so we can smoke that raghead bitch... and those CI's!!
Why'd she have to go?!
How did we know she was gonna turn after seeing us wipe out that Farsi tribe?!"
"True. But they are kinda tight. You gonna risk dying tonight?" Said Sykes.
"Ya'll got my back, right??? We fight or fall TOGETHER... Recon Blackhawks... "FOR LIFE!!!!!"

..................We will never tell. Even if threatened that we'd die.................

"Darnell James, do you love me?" Minoo said, gently brushing my face.
"More than life itself, I swear..." Eye to eye...
her fingers painting a heart on my naked chest as we lay...
"Would you run away with me? The tribe members won't approve a union of this kind...."
"I would go to hell and back if it meant for us to be together one day..."

Suited; full battle rattle... she's awaiting the chase,
But even though I'm as excited as a heart's first love,
Something tells me this is gonna be one ass backwards day... Good morning.

10-21-2013, 11:13 AM	#1
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	Week 5 - Just Write (3-0) vs. Vividlyvague (3-1) - VIVIDLYVAGUE WINS BY NS Season 2 Rules Verse Due Date - Thursday 23:59 PST Voting Deadline - Sunday 23:59 PST Line Limits - 16 - 48 Max can be higher if both agree Voting - Must vote on 3 battles and post voting links in this thread, preferably all in one post. If you don't vote on 3 battle you will be given a loss. If you lose by votes and don't vote on other battles you receive a one week suspension. Topic Good Luck @Just Write @Vividlyvague __________________ A.bove T.he R.est Last edited by Certain; 10-21-2013 at 11:58 AM.

10-24-2013, 04:41 AM	#2
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Ante up. Checking in. http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=26805 __________________ Ahem. Last edited by e11even; 10-24-2013 at 10:00 PM.

10-24-2013, 11:45 AM	#3
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	Check.. ill try to write something today but I've been busy this week. Might need that ext my dude. Ill try to drop today though __________________

10-24-2013, 12:25 PM	#4
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Ok. Np. __________________ Ahem.

10-25-2013, 01:27 AM	#5
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Heart Of Coal Finally, that gradient visible, light fades into this abandoned tone, the quiet darkness long awakened in my rapidly slowing heart... together we're headed home. Goodniii.... The approach of friendlies... it's so welcomed, yet too late. But as lovers are meant, we seemingly merge in spirit, cresting this wave of regret. We sway, grasping ever so gently, but in a desperate way... Tears flowing freely from me as she lay, Why'd she have to go?! Eyes locked with eyelids... expecting a perk up... with an, "I really can't stay".... Her last breaths betray her as I remove the jagged blade, Minoo her name, I screamed it as she painfully wept out the pain... Staring into the soul of her eyes as blood crept out that mangled gape, I felt her thoughts... her insides draping the dirt, it was me she blamed... Confused anger... an oxidized but flickering flame, Why did this have to happen?! Lord, why me this day?!?! "Only I had your best interest at heart!" She managed to say..."It seems to be only these childish games we play!!" Tears forcing my look away... Vases expelling water as they toppled, I collected her dropping body... Gasping as she fell into my arms, while they fled out of the lobby. Anger rising as the sparking embers in a furnace, I promptly Radioed the Quick Reaction to catch these targets, and their ambush posse. Ka-Bar at the ready... tactical approach in motion... Wrapping around each wall, I crept closer... the notion: be like cloaked men. Door breached, I slither into the garden square... they're posted. Minoo!! Fucking Bitch!!! The betrayal in full swing. And by the sound of it there, she's devoted. Marksmen here. Beyond aware, I boasted, These pawns look bloated... Out of the shadows I leapt!!! A full lunge into her gut as rifles ripped, penetrated organs ignored... eye to eye with her, I hold it, focused. Radio static, jumbled traffic...I can't hear shit under all these Afghan powerlines! One radio down, we were travelling back to the FOB to dine... then... "Vic one- this is Cobra Proper!! Come in!!" we're excited. Fuck! Its about time!!! "Send your traffic, over?" Maddox on the handset mashing dials... "Its that bitch PFC James was with!!! She's giving us up to those CIA guys!!!" The entire humvee staring at me... I defend my position in kind, "Get the grid so we can smoke that raghead bitch... and those CI's!! Why'd she have to go?! How did we know she was gonna turn after seeing us wipe out that Farsi tribe?!" "True. But they are kinda tight. You gonna risk dying tonight?" Said Sykes. "Ya'll got my back, right??? We fight or fall TOGETHER... Recon Blackhawks... "FOR LIFE!!!!!" ..................We will never tell. Even if threatened that we'd die................. "Darnell James, do you love me?" Minoo said, gently brushing my face. "More than life itself, I swear..." Eye to eye... her fingers painting a heart on my naked chest as we lay... "Would you run away with me? The tribe members won't approve a union of this kind...." "I would go to hell and back if it meant for us to be together one day..." Suited; full battle rattle... she's awaiting the chase, But even though I'm as excited as a heart's first love, Something tells me this is gonna be one ass backwards day... Good morning. __________________ Ahem. Last edited by e11even; 10-25-2013 at 01:33 AM.