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GOW aka Country & Karpis aka fucker of indians . . Gow aimed for votes n swayed. getting loud w. his peers I've seen the old country do shit that pushed Irish tourism back thousands of yrs U'll b knocked out. Rons a trust fund fagot & proud of that wealth, sure If GOWs ringing ANY bells it leads to an elderly Gentleman & a 'How may I help, Sir' GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger? if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger Karp buck glocks? Just stop. He's still sleeping w/ Red Slut If dudes talking like he Tote em.. it's cuz that Pole is keeping his Tent up Gow's chick loves Arthur Guinness & riding smoothly., I Parked up in it & watched that girl Start to Finish like Drive In Movies. This lame picks vid games over pussy- that gay shit is useless God of war been on top of a box 3 times..they're all Playstation exclusives Karp'll get fuckin dropped. Pussy'd never bust a shot .. Ill buck a glock til it 'leave his sides hanging' out like a Muffin Top Karps tryna fit in w. the college crew by doing dumb shit he reads about The prank is 'TP a house'. it's NOT wed a Chieftan spouse & make TeePee's ya house .
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hush aka orc aka redrydinghood It’s a shame, look. How his past is the reason why yall stay shook ORC you are a son of a bitch….that slept w/ 20 guys thanks to facebook She had the sorest throat chuck her deuces n the whore is ghost Debby blew more last year than that storm hitting the Florida coast Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in Sick of ya club stories cuz even ya best fails Stop sayin you’ll be fly till you die, it just sounds like Red Tales I put up great stats, bitches like a man not a boy & I just state facts I beat it up & Pound cakes, you bake some while humming that drake track Yes we get it vic you hit it big, props on the dumb luck But if you try pushing Kar buttons and start shit, you’ll get fucked up & why you always goin at deon? you don’t sound grown You just hate he’s from Motown’s home & you just motown homes 35k was a come up, down payment, but the message was clear Instead you bought 2 laptops, 2 cars, and gave ya madre rent for the rest of the yr
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Gow aimed for votes n swayed. getting loud w. his peers
I've seen the old country do shit that pushed Irish tourism back thousands of yrs ^solid open U'll b knocked out. Rons a trust fund fagot & proud of that wealth, sure If GOWs ringing ANY bells it leads to an elderly Gentleman & a 'How may I help, Sir' ^seems kinda familiar. giving u the benefit of the doubt tho. not bad GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger? if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger ^yep Karp buck glocks? Just stop. He's still sleeping w/ Red Slut If dudes talking like he Tote em.. it's cuz that Pole is keeping his Tent up ^aite Gow's chick loves Arthur Guinness & riding smoothly., I Parked up in it & watched that girl Start to Finish like Drive In Movies. ^not bad This lame picks vid games over pussy- that gay shit is useless God of war been on top of a box 3 times..they're all Playstation exclusives ^aite. god of war/kratos concept kiiinda old Karp'll get fuckin dropped. Pussy'd never bust a shot .. Ill buck a glock til it 'leave his sides hanging' out like a Muffin Top ^aite Karps tryna fit in w. the college crew by doing dumb shit he reads about The prank is 'TP a house'. it's NOT wed a Chieftan spouse & make TeePee's ya house ^good closer vs. It’s a shame, look. How his past is the reason why yall stay shook ORC you are a son of a bitch….that slept w/ 20 guys thanks to facebook ^hmm, too simple for my liking She had the sorest throat chuck her deuces n the whore is ghost Debby blew more last year than that storm hitting the Florida coast ^better. still kinda simple (the blow wp), but it's better Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in ^lol. funny, but not too clever Sick of ya club stories cuz even ya best fails Stop sayin you’ll be fly till you die, it just sounds like Red Tales ^again wp is simple, and the line's decent I put up great stats, bitches like a man not a boy & I just state facts I beat it up & Pound cakes, you bake some while humming that drake track ^aite Yes we get it vic you hit it big, props on the dumb luck But if you try pushing Kar buttons and start shit, you’ll get fucked up ^not bad & why you always goin at deon? you don’t sound grown You just hate he’s from Motown’s home & you just motown homes ^nice 35k was a come up, down payment, but the message was clear Instead you bought 2 laptops, 2 cars, and gave ya madre rent for the rest of the yr ^lol dece so yea. neither had crazy standouts to me, but neither had too many misses either. all really consistent. but orc & hush's concepts were just more clever to me. karp and gow had some very simple connections that just didn't do anything for me. that's why i gotta give it to orc & hush. it was a cool little read tho. props to both. v/orc&hush |
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playstation muffin top tee pee was ok vs silencer pound cake motown lotb tbh closer was good nice battle. ..basically even on quotes. ..difference is gow n karp had more humor in they lines and didn't miss as big imo first 6 lines in orc/hush verse were boring and mad ineffective especially with their caliber. ...close battle but i got gow n ak with better ideas n execution overall v/akgow
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Tote em line was ill and everything after that was fairly strong ... started slow not misses but soft hits closer was illy
Vs Potato line was great Maybe lotb and from kar buttons down was strong with another ill closer felt the start of the verse was slower then the opp and stalled right at red tales then picked back up and finished strong .. shits close I like the potato line was shit was smooth simple and relevant ... last 3 lines hit just as hard as thiers but I think hush/orc edge it out |
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Gow aimed for votes n swayed. getting loud w. his peers
I've seen the old country do shit that pushed Irish tourism back thousands of yrs OK... decent... U'll b knocked out. Rons a trust fund fagot & proud of that wealth, sure If GOWs ringing ANY bells it leads to an elderly Gentleman & a 'How may I help, Sir' lollllll good. funny GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger? if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger hahaha. wp is simple but more wasn't needed, the punch was strong enough on its own. Set up well, too Karp buck glocks? Just stop. He's still sleeping w/ Red Slut If dudes talking like he Tote em.. it's cuz that Pole is keeping his Tent up heh, cool... not bad Gow's chick loves Arthur Guinness & riding smoothly., I Parked up in it & watched that girl Start to Finish like Drive In Movies. nice. swag & flowish but the punch/wp were still pretty strong This lame picks vid games over pussy- that gay shit is useless God of war been on top of a box 3 times..they're all Playstation exclusives ehhh nah... generic 'box' wp Karp'll get fuckin dropped. Pussy'd never bust a shot .. Ill buck a glock til it 'leave his sides hanging' out like a Muffin Top heh, cool... not bad Karps tryna fit in w. the college crew by doing dumb shit he reads about The prank is 'TP a house'. it's NOT wed a Chieftan spouse & make TeePee's ya house lmao @ chieftan spouse ... that extra detail of the flip made this line .[/QUOTE] vs It’s a shame, look. How his past is the reason why yall stay shook ORC you are a son of a bitch….that slept w/ 20 guys thanks to facebook heh, cool personal flip She had the sorest throat chuck her deuces n the whore is ghost Debby blew more last year than that storm hitting the Florida coast cool, not bad np Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in Not bad... I think a line like this needs more of a swag/flow element to it to really hit. Points for creativity but didn't hit that hard Sick of ya club stories cuz even ya best fails Stop sayin you’ll be fly till you die, it just sounds like Red Tales not bad... didn't know that alias but OK, cool I put up great stats, bitches like a man not a boy & I just state facts I beat it up & Pound cakes, you bake some while humming that drake track good... esp cuz Orc is known as a Drake fan Yes we get it vic you hit it big, props on the dumb luck But if you try pushing Kar buttons and start shit, you’ll get fucked up Nice personal/self np combo. This was clever & why you always goin at deon? you don’t sound grown You just hate he’s from Motown’s home & you just motown homes LOL. Good 35k was a come up, down payment, but the message was clear Instead you bought 2 laptops, 2 cars, and gave ya madre rent for the rest of the yr [B]eh this line didn't do much for me. I'm down with the diss on him blowing the money on BS but felt the line was too statementish Close. I need to re-read. Edge to Orc/Hush. Their wording was stronger and funnier throughout the whole verse. Gow/Karp had the motown line which was hilarious and pound cakes was good as well, but even the rest of the stuff that was good just wasn't delivered in as much of a belittling manor as Orc/Hush, so overall I enjoyed Orc/Hush a little more v/ Horc
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Gow aimed for votes n swayed. getting loud w. his peers
I've seen the old country do shit that pushed Irish tourism back thousands of yrs [cool opener] U'll b knocked out. Rons a trust fund fagot & proud of that wealth, sure If GOWs ringing ANY bells it leads to an elderly Gentleman & a 'How may I help, Sir' [yeah] GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger? if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger [nice] Karp buck glocks? Just stop. He's still sleeping w/ Red Slut If dudes talking like he Tote em.. it's cuz that Pole is keeping his Tent up [naaah] Gow's chick loves Arthur Guinness & riding smoothly., I Parked up in it & watched that girl Start to Finish like Drive In Movies. [ok] This lame picks vid games over pussy- that gay shit is useless God of war been on top of a box 3 times..they're all Playstation exclusives [feels played or just obvious, nah] Karp'll get fuckin dropped. Pussy'd never bust a shot .. Ill buck a glock til it 'leave his sides hanging' out like a Muffin Top [k] Karps tryna fit in w. the college crew by doing dumb shit he reads about The prank is 'TP a house'. it's NOT wed a Chieftan spouse & make TeePee's ya house [lol] It’s a shame, look. How his past is the reason why yall stay shook ORC you are a son of a bitch….that slept w/ 20 guys thanks to facebook [and the rest? decent] She had the sorest throat chuck her deuces n the whore is ghost Debby blew more last year than that storm hitting the Florida coast [aigh] Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in [lol'd] Sick of ya club stories cuz even ya best fails Stop sayin you’ll be fly till you die, it just sounds like Red Tales [ok] I put up great stats, bitches like a man not a boy & I just state facts I beat it up & Pound cakes, you bake some while humming that drake track [not for me] Yes we get it vic you hit it big, props on the dumb luck But if you try pushing Kar buttons and start shit, you’ll get fucked up [needed a better setup] & why you always goin at deon? you don’t sound grown You just hate he’s from Motown’s home & you just motown homes [yes] 35k was a come up, down payment, but the message was clear Instead you bought 2 laptops, 2 cars, and gave ya madre rent for the rest of the yr [cool] orc/hush got this one, punches had a harder sting and because the setups weren't as plain imo.. |
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Gow aimed for votes n swayed. getting loud w. his peers
I've seen the old country do shit that pushed Irish tourism back thousands of yrs U'll b knocked out. Rons a trust fund fagot & proud of that wealth, sure If GOWs ringing ANY bells it leads to an elderly Gentleman & a 'How may I help, Sir' GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger? if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger Karps tryna fit in w. the college crew by doing dumb shit he reads about The prank is 'TP a house'. it's NOT wed a Chieftan spouse & make TeePee's ya house vs Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in & why you always goin at deon? you don’t sound grown You just hate he’s from Motown’s home & you just motown homes 35k was a come up, down payment, but the message was clear Instead you bought 2 laptops, 2 cars, and gave ya madre rent for the rest of the yr v - orc/hush. they had consistency in this battle, 4 vs 3. most of their lines just were coming out stronger too due to better wording. most of the concepts weren't played but i've seen them done before in this battle on both sides, u guys did word it better tho and some made me lol like the motown line and the chieftan spouse |
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GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger?
if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger Karp buck glocks? Just stop. He's still sleeping w/ Red Slut If dudes talking like he Tote em.. it's cuz that Pole is keeping his Tent up Gow's chick loves Arthur Guinness & riding smoothly., I Parked up in it & watched that girl Start to Finish like Drive In Movies. This lame picks vid games over pussy- that gay shit is useless God of war been on top of a box 3 times..they're all Playstation exclusives Karp'll get fuckin dropped. Pussy'd never bust a shot .. Ill buck a glock til it 'leave his sides hanging' out like a Muffin Top vs She had the sorest throat chuck her deuces n the whore is ghost Debby blew more last year than that storm hitting the Florida coast Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in Sick of ya club stories cuz even ya best fails Stop sayin you’ll be fly till you die, it just sounds like Red Tales I put up great stats, bitches like a man not a boy & I just state facts I beat it up & Pound cakes, you bake some while humming that drake track V/orc n hush, another dope battle this was cool i thought both brought some heat but i felt orc an vic had harder hits here tbh but def a dope battle ak n gow wasnt as consistent here imo but nice read props to both
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Gow aimed for votes n swayed. getting loud w. his peers I've seen the old country do shit that pushed Irish tourism back thousands of yrs ehh just ok U'll b knocked out. Rons a trust fund fagot & proud of that wealth, sure If GOWs ringing ANY bells it leads to an elderly Gentleman & a 'How may I help, Sir' kinda funny but being wealthy isn't really a diss to me GOWs a nerdy fagot.. & Karp you're expecting some danger? if u're on the War path then u'll have online relationships & impregnate a stranger Standard stuff here, cool Karp buck glocks? Just stop. He's still sleeping w/ Red Slut If dudes talking like he Tote em.. it's cuz that Pole is keeping his Tent up Cool Gow's chick loves Arthur Guinness & riding smoothly., I Parked up in it & watched that girl Start to Finish like Drive In Movies. like the inner multis here. bar is ok This lame picks vid games over pussy- that gay shit is useless God of war been on top of a box 3 times..they're all Playstation exclusives this is just lazy Karp'll get fuckin dropped. Pussy'd never bust a shot .. Ill buck a glock til it 'leave his sides hanging' out like a Muffin Top basic Karps tryna fit in w. the college crew by doing dumb shit he reads about The prank is 'TP a house'. it's NOT wed a Chieftan spouse & make TeePee's ya house ha ok.. this is cool Overall I think you guys may be trying to get by on arrogance alone... Seemed like you didn't really try but still had some decent stuff Garp It’s a shame, look. How his past is the reason why yall stay shook ORC you are a son of a bitch….that slept w/ 20 guys thanks to facebook I was thinking there'd be more to this but it ended in an obvious way She had the sorest throat chuck her deuces n the whore is ghost Debby blew more last year than that storm hitting the Florida coast good bc of the actual name Fuck ya irish heritage, snuff this kid cuz I love to win I’ll run in ya crib and use a potato for a silencer just to rub it in ehhh... ok Sick of ya club stories cuz even ya best fails Stop sayin you’ll be fly till you die, it just sounds like Red Tales aiiiight I put up great stats, bitches like a man not a boy & I just state facts I beat it up & Pound cakes, you bake some while humming that drake track LOL... Yes we get it vic you hit it big, props on the dumb luck But if you try pushing Kar buttons and start shit, you’ll get fucked up ha, Kar nameplay is done but this works bc Vic's thread & why you always goin at deon? you don’t sound grown You just hate he’s from Motown’s home & you just motown homes this is cool 35k was a come up, down payment, but the message was clear Instead you bought 2 laptops, 2 cars, and gave ya madre rent for the rest of the yr lol sting started off slow but then got good towards the end Decent little battle here. Seemed a bit rushed on both ends.. Garp had the lines that appealed to me so MVGT GARP
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